[HP: The Marauders Era] Merlin's Beard!

The characters of James and Sirius are well mastered! The gradual progression and foreshadowing on the emotional line is also logical. The most praiseworthy thing is that a first-grade boy pays too much attention to the girl he likes but doesn't realize that he likes it. There is no separation at all. I'm really looking forward to the plot in the future! !

A very nice fanfic! Snape was really that kind of damned person inside. The main plot feels so pitiful, but that doesn't stop his little thoughts from being really dark. Holmes's character is very stubborn. Lily was also a very good little girl. If he hadn't died, I wouldn't have thought what a lively and cheerful little boy Harry would have been. The thing that surprises me the most is Sirius. Every time I think about Merlin's words and actions, I really want to go in and give him two big mouths, but from God's perspective, I feel that he is a little bit pitiful, pitiful and pitiful, but Merlin should not be soft-hearted, humiliate him severely, and let the young master know what the real dangers of the world are. Everyone in it has personality traits, so is Martin really the Martin in Variety Martin? He has so few scenes that I forget about him and Crouch as I watch them. Madam, you are a little cake who is very good at writing novels_(:зゝ∠)_

It's really good😭 I can only say that I'm really surprised to see such a good-looking HP fanfic on Tomato. The plot is very attractive and sometimes the teacher's clever metaphors make me laugh out loud. After reading it, I still feel unsatisfied and want to update again. The main reason is that the teacher's writing of James is really cute and charming. I really fell in love with it! . . . 💖💖💖

From the current point of view, this book is really comparable to the Orange Light masterpiece. Here are a few points. 1. The whole process will not revolve around the love story between the female protagonist and the male protagonists. It will have certain thoughts and things of its own, and its own story. The daily life is really interesting. 2. The insights into the male protagonists are very thorough. This was the first time I was shocked when reading a book. It made me feel that the people I liked before might just be my own imagination and characters, but in this novel I felt that they really existed. 3. The distribution of favorability is very reasonable. For example, in the part about Regulus, children who grow up in pure-blood families will indeed feel this way. After all, they are always surrounded by such people. But Merlin is a person who has been reincarnated countless times from the future. She comes with good intentions, so of course she is different from them. ! (The one about Sirius is also very reasonable and made me think again about Sirius' life experience.) All in all, it really impressed me! ! ! Renew! ! I will be back to review! ! [Send heart] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Listening to books while working, I am often laughed at by Merlin and other children. It is really cute. I personally like the line with Lily better. What is this? Lily? Take a breath... Merlin's portrayal is very charming. I remember Merlin once said that Lily should be able to accomplish what she wants, instead of dying in her twenties after becoming an affectionate background (similar). I think Merlin is an emotional and compassionate person but unable to change (sad) Besides, I really like the name Merlin, it feels like it can create miracles~

It's really amazing that I saw the most appetizing HP article on Tomato. Most HP articles are very OOC and lack that flavor. I have read countless tweets. Either they are very white or the style is very boring. I don't like them. The quality of many people's articles is not high, but this one is very good. It has that feeling and I really like the setting of this article. The strategy game is really interesting. The Potter in this article makes me get his charm for the first time. I think the real James should be like this. Sirius' secret love also makes me feel very moved. Looking forward to the change in darkening value. Remus also likes me very much. He is very good-looking and deserves better.

It is my imaginary parent generation, and it realistically describes the conflicts and frictions between friends. The little daily life is very heart-warming. There is very little description of the family members in the original work. Almost a few lines determine the life of this person. We can only imagine their life in a few words. The author's writing is very beautiful and true. The last time I liked the movie "The Predators" that I liked so much was Orange Light's "The Predators". Unfortunately, it was discontinued...

I also read many chapters before commenting. Sometimes I feel that the character design may be a bit broken, but the author later saves it. I think Merlin is a very good girl, and she gets along well with everyone. When James confessed her love in public, I also dug my toes for her. The author's writing is really good, and the characters are very good. It's very vivid and makes me feel like it's a real Hogwarts. Everyone has shortcomings and advantages, but I always feel that Merlin is a very painful person. Maybe it's because I only watched half of it. Everyone makes mistakes. I always feel that everyone's characters are awkward. Maybe it's from my perspective as a bystander. ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥Please don't curse. I feel that the heroine is inexplicable. James and the others bully their classmates. The heroine is angry with them for a while, and then easily forgives them. I like this happened twice. There is no cp in this article, but the troubles are the same as if there is cp. Although it is an otome, I always feel that some plots are weird. The part about kissing Sirius was really baffling.

My husband wrote it so well... The best HP parent generation. Every character has no OOC at all. Everyone has their own personality and the writing is smooth and natural. I rely on this book during my vacation. Also, can I update ten chapters a day (whisper) Will you be sanctioned (banned) if you score too high? I will keep the score high! ! Also, I really like daily articles like this)) It's very relaxing, happy and warm. Everyone is very cute! It's like a big family. Please be sure to update! !

The writing is very good, and the story is very warm. It is depressing and healing at the same time, because Baby Merlin has escaped for a long time, which is very similar to my mental state at a certain stage, but James often heals me. The character of James is well created and fits the original work very well. He is the best James among the many fanfics I have seen. The character of Snape is also well written, not OOC. Although I don't like Snape, it is undeniable that the author analyzed his character very well. Real people are so complicated. I can only say that Baby Merlin will scold a lot. But I personally feel that Gao Kaiping is gone. It's so boring and depressing later on. Part of Merlin's character has quietly collapsed. I don't know if it can be better in the future.