The Marauders' Story

The plot is so rich!! And it seems to perfectly integrate what was said in the original work. Hagrid later found a wife for the Acromantula, which was very natural (I thought it was a basilisk thread at first🤣I almost thought it was a copy of the original work again😂) And this emotional change (currently in the friendship stage) is really amazing! Class! Can! Like! It is the kind of progressive friendship that is very real and healing. The author is very sweet. [Sending my heart] Three of the three of them are super cute [laughing] The transformation of Jamie and Sirius is very natural and comfortable. There is no such crazy heartthrob or crazy dog-licking behavior. The author loves little Esther! ❤️ I feel that Esther's brother will be a long-term line. He actually cares about his sister, but on the surface he seems a little indifferent, and then he seems to be busy with something, maybe it's family responsibility or something? Great follow-up treatment from the author of Squatting! I also have a small suggestion. The author [sends my heart] about the creation of the lion-lion image of Jamie, a cannonball personality. I feel that there can be more funny plots and diversified daily life, antagonizing people and pranks, and a little more. I have seen a very interesting saying before, "James is a lion who is not OOC no matter how you write it🤣" I feel that he has a lot of room for shaping, my It means a round character with more three-dimensional and diverse emotions and activities 🥹 (The part where the magic wand is used in the latest chapter I am currently reading feels particularly good! It is very interesting, and it is an innovation that particularly fits the character image and the setting of the magical world view!! Please do more of this, teacher [sending my heart]) The author must write it down [sending my heart] 😆 It feels like a particularly sincere and warm writing style! 🥰Teacher, I will always follow you!

It's very beautiful. The heroine Esther is very cute. The description of James is not OOC. The high-spirited campus life is really touching. The relationship between the two is very delicate. The conflicts arising from personal ideas can also be resolved. So even though the update is interrupted, I still keep reading.

The writing is really good. The strengths and weaknesses of the Marauders are all listed. The author's analysis of the characters is also great. Sirius's prejudice against other purebloods due to family reasons at the beginning, James's arrogance at the beginning... The transformation of the subsequent characters is also very reasonable, and it also completes several small details in the original work 😘 This is one of the best fics I've ever read on Tomato, James is a really charming guy

I can't do it anymore, why is this James like this😭 This is entirely from an article in my mind. In their era, that kind of sparkling youthful youth can resist all bad things.

The interaction between everyone is super cute, the friendship is well written, and the ambiguity of not understanding one's feelings is well written. This James always says some ambiguous words suddenly, maybe he doesn't realize it himself, which is very easy to make friends with. Sirius also has a crush on the heroine, but it's not particularly obvious. The plot is quite rich and the characters are well grasped. This James is super cute, and the heroine is also a piece of wood. When can we get together? Unfortunately, the author stopped updating [Start]

It's really good. I forgot to rate it before. Now I come to the front and see that the teacher hasn't given the score yet, so I quickly give it a five-star rating. Come on, teacher, you wrote very well👍.ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ(≧▽≦)

I just discovered this article. I feel it is well written and the characters are very realistic without any ooC. I feel it is so interesting to get along with each other on a daily basis. James's character is really interesting. I am really looking forward to the future relationship line. According to the original story, James didn't fall in love with Lily at first sight. I don't know if it was the author's personal setting.

What a cute interaction, super pure love! Love does not come from the shallowest level of vision. When I discovered that I love you, I realized that it was already hopeless. A very delicate and adorable love, written by the author, I will always wait for you 😢😢

I like it, the characters are very realistic, and I also like Abby's character, a calm Gryffindor. Looking forward to the next Quidditch game!

Oh, I just like to watch some sweet love, but if you haven't fallen in love yet, it's gone. Lao Da, come back soon.