Harry Potter: An Unconventional Witch’s Coming-of-Age Plan

Boss... I cried so hard! Sethe is the most Ravenclaw heroine I have ever seen, I feel like I am falling in love with her!! The early plot feels like a calm lake, but from the details, you can see the dark waves in the lake. Later, one thing after another began to be put on the table, and the plot began to become tense, depressing but hopeful... Compared with a simple romance novel, this is more like a history of Sethe's growth. Step by step, time and time again, she firmly walks towards the path she wants and protects the one she loves. I cried, the writing is online, the plot is online, why is the writing so cold... Introducing again! Bosses, come and see our Setheme! A calm and rational academic master from Ravenclaw, who is two years ahead of the Marauders. He is not limited to romance plots but also develops into a story for the heroine. The writing is online, the IQ is online, and the plot is online. There is no special golden finger, it is not a cool article. We, Sethe, are doing our best to protect the big family of Hogwarts step by step with our own efforts.

Just after I tied it, I came to comment, ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧I really like it very much At first, I always felt that the writing style was too plain, like flowing water, slowly. I admit, I quite like the slow flow of water, but after all, I don't have the patience. But big words and stories are very different. Other people's stories may stay on the surface, so I can't accept that kind of blandness, or it's boring. But it belongs to the progressive style. The story is told slowly, and the characters and plots are presented to us. The writing style is very delicate, and it has its own ideas and unconventional thinking. Da Da slowly lays out the background of the story, using real and natural brushstrokes to make Sesmi's image more and more full and three-dimensional, making people fall more and more in love with this such a transparent and real soul through the words. She is in line with the feeling that Ravenclaw has always conveyed to everyone, pursuing knowledge, delving into knowledge, being rational and peaceful, but she is also full of justice, distinguishing right from wrong, and has the courage to challenge injustice and incorrect behavior. She does not stop at the level of thinking, but also takes action. Faced with pressure from all directions, he gently catches it, cleverly relieves it, and has the arrogance to bend rather than bend. It gives warmth to the world and proves to us that truth, goodness and beauty will always exist. He is the kind of person I have always fantasized about becoming, someone who truly fits the mold of water. He is really attractive. He is not too pure, radical or ignorant in traditional narratives. Unlike other narratives, where Snape's double agent and half-life-long atonement later beautify and hide his past actions, it objectively and truly shows us a three-dimensional Snape who is hateful and indeed pitiful. Dada is really rare to see such a tense environment like the marriage era, the absurdity and unreasonableness of the pure blood theory, and the terror and ignorance of the abuse of magic led by Voldemort. It really relied on the background of the book to write its own story. I really like it, so I came here to rate it before I finished reading it. I really want this book to be seen by more people. I have also read a lot of HP fanfics (as evidenced by my reading time and books). This one is really good. It is in the top 3 of all the fanfics I have read, or even Top1 (only my personal opinion). So I hope you can keep writing, so that we can see Sesmee's growth story and the positive values ​​​​that DaDa conveys through words. Come on! Good books will definitely be seen ദ്ദി˶>ᴗo)✧ @hogwartsfishpondmaster

The perfect Ravenclaw heroine, so charming! Sisterhood is a natural thing. Jpg She is really mature. And James is so cute and energetic, it's like nuclear power burning 🦌 The Christmas photo shoot made me think how could Setheme not love him... He is such a joy to be around! When I was reading the article, I suddenly felt that it was really not easy for everyone in my generation... Riddle was still there, the Death Eaters were in full swing, and the children in school gradually began to take sides. Even though they were not in a very young age, they had to consider such complicated matters. Fortunately, the pain is real, and the happiness is also real. I hope the final ending will not be the death-defying victory of the original work...

It can be seen that the author writes very deeply and thoughtfully. Because of this, Sesme is definitely the heroine who can best be called a Ravenclaw. Her soul has been completely shaped by the author. In fact, in many places, I feel that the author must have a good way of writing argumentative essays 🤦 (I (This damn high school student bloodline) many points of view are established instead of being empty-handed. It is very refreshing to read the full text. It is the kind of feeling that valuable things have entered the brain. I dare say that this alone beats 80% of the articles on the site. The writing style is also very mature and does not look embarrassing. Moreover, some of the exploration and shaping of the original characters were very successful, making me feel that he is who he is. In short, this is my first time to comment on Yang Persimmon. This book is really well written and very speculative. Of course, these advantages may have caused a certain reading threshold and not many people read it.

The heroine of this book is definitely the most stunning I have ever read in a while. The article focuses more on the growth of the heroine and the description of the situation in the wizarding world than on love, which is great!

It is very thoughtfully written, a real Ravenclaw, with wisdom and knowledge, and the heroine is very strong (not only her strength, but also her thoughts)

I particularly like the heroine's character. Rational, firm and calm, it is exactly what I thought Ravenclaw should be like. The plot in the whole book is very attractive.

Looks very comfortable