A Dream of Huangliang: The Mad Heroine Hates Me to the Bone

The book is good-looking, but it's not what I expected. I thought it was the type of article about pursuing a husband, but it turns out it's about Jianghu. The author's writing is very steady. The advantage is that it has an outline and won't break the writing. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. The writing style is slightly inferior, and the control of the rhythm needs to be strengthened, which sometimes makes people feel uncomfortable. I thought it was boring or superficial, but I quite like the characters in the book, especially the male protagonist and the several main female characters who appear. The author does not follow conventional routines, so people are looking forward to the follow-up development of the plot. But personally, I still like to watch comedies, so I hope they all have a good ending. I'm really disappointed. I've been building this book for so long, and it's strength is crumbling so fast. There are so many poisonous points and minefields. There are so many women who can write about it. The author must cling to Feng Huojun and not let go. After laying the groundwork for so long, he just comes to a confessional. There is no emotional line. It's just two stubborn people who have been trying to kill themselves. One protects the other, it's really thunderous. The emotional line is inexplicably abrupt and embarrassing, and it also plays with amnesia jokes. At the same time, I want to write that the heroine is extraordinary and at the same time, she is stubborn and like a few bitches. The author is a tremolo, right? I have to scold him before he changes who likes to read it. Idiot, he is a messy person. In the middle of the night, I was so angry that I took out the book from the trash can and scolded the author for writing such a bitch. Why didn't you write about your green-haired turtle style? Why didn't you continue to write about your Linxian wooden hook lady? You turned into a mud horse, aren't you very good at it? Isn't your wife also throwing herself into the arms of other men all day long to write such disgusting things? Your full price is really 40,000 cnm.

Hello, I am the father of the child with this account. The child was diagnosed with severe depression the day before yesterday. I just learned that after reading here for a long time and repeated it many times, his symptoms improved a lot at first. I was really happy. I knew that one day he suddenly picked up a knife and wanted to commit suicide. After I asked many times, my child finally confessed to me, saying that in fact, I have always known that I have depression. I read here every day to relieve it, especially this one. I feel that I want to continue reading. I feel that I have a pursuit in my heart. I asked him again. Isn't that great? Then why did you take the knife today? The child told me that the author only updated a few pictures every day. I couldn't accept it. I couldn't bear it. I couldn't see the sunshine, but he disappeared in a few minutes and returned to the darkness. After listening to the child's words, I fell into deep thought. So I beg the author to save my child. I'm afraid that one day I don't see him, and he will commit suicide again. Don't bother me. Updating hundreds of chapters a day is not too much.

Are there any books similar to this one? [Working on draft] I read this kind of book for the first time and I liked it, but the reading was too slow. [I almost cried] [I almost cried]

It's a pretty good book. It has a system but does not rely on the system. It has already surpassed many novels. The writing style is also quite comfortable. It belongs to the type of protagonist who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. It is not bad in this aspect. The calculation is simpler and more direct, and it will be better if it is more complicated. In addition, except for the first few chapters, the heroine has not appeared at all so far. Even if the plot hasn't reached that level yet, it's okay to write a few scenes. I've watched less than half of it, and I haven't watched it anymore. Mainly because it doesn't attract me anymore. I glanced at the table of contents and it's not the plot development direction I like. I read the comments again, and the longer I read, the more I scolded them. I also saw that some people liked my comments. Here's a reminder, it may not be so good after the middle.

I'm a layman, and I just like to watch the yandere Shura field. When Feng appears, the good brothers will kick me. 🐮+🐢, I'm such a big thunder

I thought she was a yandere, but Feng Huojun appeared in the scene once later and still had no sense of presence.

I was attracted by the title at first, and I gave it four stars because when I finished reading it, I found that although the protagonist has a system, there are relatively few roles in the system, and I prefer protagonists who can control the overall situation, have reasonable logic, and have ups and downs in the plot. What I am dissatisfied with is that this book seems to be about a single female protagonist, and there will be a plot to chase her husband, but there are too few scenes for the female protagonist in this book.

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The progress of the plot is a bit slow. I feel that slow-burning stories are difficult to become popular, and the data will not be very good. There are currently 61 chapters in this book, and I feel that Feng or Junli will have to wait at least forty or fifty chapters before they appear [face covering] I sincerely hope that the author will speed up the pace of writing [heartfelt] Feng or Jun loves the third prince deeply, but the male protagonist in this book only wears the body of the third prince (similar to seizing the body, what would Feng think if he knew about it, the male protagonist has the memory of the third prince, so Feng will transfer this love to the male protagonist? Imagine: if the third prince is the protagonist, and the male protagonist is the villain...), And Feng is very regretful after knowing that the wine is not poisonous, the depth of Feng's regret can only be because the person she killed is the third prince, I feel here... Sigh. But according to the introduction of the book, Feng should be a very important female protagonist... So later when the male protagonist meets Feng or the Queen, the male protagonist will say that he is the reincarnation of the third prince, or...

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