Hehuan Sect: The Villain’s Protagonist’s Arrogant Mother Comes Knocking

The story outline is good and innovative.

Author, have you written Liu Beiwen?

After reading the sermon about old Beijing chicken rolls, this is what I liked [Like]

It's not a villain at all. The author doesn't know how to write villain templates at all. He just made up a villain name. He is still the kind of protagonist who pretends to be a pig and eats tigers and eats the weak. He is ridiculed and scolded wherever he goes. The only thing that is interesting is that he keeps eating meat. If you want to see the authentic villain template, you can read some urban literature genres. There are many well-written ones.

Even though they could join forces with Ancestor Hehuan to destroy the Imperial City, they had to be sold as hostages to the Imperial City. If the circle doesn't come back, it's said that the ancestor is injured. It's obviously a matter of longevity.

Liu Beiwen looks like Shuangwen's Kuwen

Simple and crude, clean and without ink stains, but there are a few minor problems: 1. The explanation of the realm is not clear. Except for a brief explanation in the first few chapters, it is a bit confusing. And there are some gods and earth gods in the later chapters and no explanation of the subsequent realms. 2. The world view is unclear. The details of the Misty Rain Dynasty, Tianyuan Divine Kingdom, Tianxuan Dynasty, etc. Are a bit confusing. The protagonist will go to some other star field at this moment. 3. The title of the novel says it is a villain, but in fact it is no different from Son of Destiny, but it does not mock the physique, which is okay 4. The system has a low sense of existence. I'm not sure whether the author deliberately weakened the system's sense of existence or what, but it's not a big problem. 5. The protagonist's combat power is a bit low. As mentioned earlier, he started to practice not long ago, and he was able to fight against strong men in the starry sky. He was still able to easily kill him in an instant. Even if he skipped a level, it was quite messy. It was like a person who had just practiced in the foundation-building realm and could easily kill a strong Mahayana man. 6. The pace is a bit too fast. Several women in the front and behind are silent, and his master has no part in the scene. It feels like many plots jump to another plot without being written clearly. The jump is inexplicable. 7. It's not a minor issue. If the author has something to say, just code the photo. Can't it be vertical? Every time I look at it, I have to turn my phone horizontally [laughing] This is all that comes to mind at the moment, but the above problems have little impact. If you are just passing the time and don't have high requirements for content details, you can still read it, so I still give it a 5-star review [Chigua]

The protagonist is looked down upon, betrayed, exploited and poisoned to death everywhere

Fortunately, I picked up this book before I entered the little dark room. I had a hunch that I would enter this book in a few days, so I'd like to read it now [face covering]

It's pretty good, but the details are there, the process is there, and the setting is very novel. The main function of the system is to help some dead cannon fodder avenge the sons of destiny and the people around the sons of destiny, so as to obtain the opportunities that the cannon fodders get. The system's proportion is not large. , There is nothing more than releasing revenge missions (at least for now), pure cool writing, starting with revenge on Hongyan Qin, the son of Luck, and Qin Zi, the son of Luck (Hongyan is the adoptive mother of the son of Luck, and the son is also the son of Luck), the protagonist's IQ Online, I just feel that the revenge is a bit too light, especially for Qin Zi. I know that Qin Zi is now used to threaten Qin into submission, but I still suggest that the beauties of the Son of Luck can backstab the Son of Luck later. After all, the Son of Luck is so good at doing things that he originally followed Qin back. If you want to discuss matters that can be solved by canceling the engagement and giving compensation, you have to destroy the family. If you really can't reach an agreement, you will destroy it. If you don't even talk about it, it is equivalent to cuckolding Qin's fiancé and annihilating the whole family. It's a light revenge. I'm sorry for the reward given to the protagonist.