My Immortal Venerable Is Clearly Super Powerful, Yet Only Wants to Lie Flat

I've been following it for many days, and I would like to make a suggestion: use less psychological descriptions of the female character's relationship [face covering] The plot is actually quite interesting, but sometimes I see it caught off guard, like eating sand in the bread. The apprentice princess imagined that she wanted to marry the protagonist, the daughter imagined her master and the protagonist, the anti-inflammatory template heroine fell in love with anti-inflammatory, and the master has a crush on the protagonist... Obviously, he can also write about normal women, such as his daughter's crazy mother. •ᴗ•💧

At first I thought this book was like that one, about the secluded life of one person and one cow [face covering] I actually wanted to see my daughter coming over, but how can I put it, this book is very interesting, a perfect book about recruiting disciples... The only flaw is that the little daughter's role is too small [crying] It only plays a role in promoting the development of the plot... But other than that, the author's writing style is good and the writing is really good! When writing an article about cultivating immortals, the most taboo thing is the issue of combat power. There is nothing wrong with what the author wrote, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed. Also, the author has a great advantage in not listening to the interference of some readers. It is very important to be able to write according to your own inner thoughts! Novels written in this way usually have an outline and an ending. Very nice [sending heart] [blowing kiss]

To be honest, in my personal opinion, before the incarnation came out, I could get a perfect score, at least around 95 points. The reason why I didn't read it was just because I personally dislike the incarnation. The other minor issues can be ignored or skipped, but after the incarnation came out, I'm sorry. I'm just representing myself. The book is pretty good, and it scores high points in a subject where the protagonist is the only one who doesn't know how powerful he is until he incarnates outside his body. The reason why I stopped reading is because I personally don't like avatars and the like. Do not spray. Glass heart. Come on.

Everything was fine up to now, but in Chapter 216, I suddenly felt extremely poisonous. How could I make the protagonist look like this? [Awkward laugh] Five-star reward, keep up the good work

It's good to watch. It's the first time I've seen this perspective of a boss. The protagonist's father is also a very interesting personality. The father is a waste of money, but the protagonist is just clinging to it all the time. The polarity is reversed [laughing][laughing]

It's not a brainless novel. The character creation is also very good. Mingxin Monk could have written better, but it has been very successful. It can be seen that the author is seriously shaping the characters. I have to say that this article has many problems, but it is already well written. Some suggestions are to kill the first monk. There is too much nonsense. It feels like the plot is being dragged out forcibly. It is also found in other places. Then there is the issue of the emotional line of the male and female protagonists. Subtle Love is well written, but it can be more interactive between the two. However, this suggestion is of no use since I am already married. The writing is already great. It is not a very powerful writing, but it is not a pure novel either. To sum up, the biggest problem is that the plot is dragged out and there is too much nonsense. It is okay if the protagonist is a little cowardly. I have finished watching Dragons back then, so I will not criticize the plot. The writing has flaws but is great. Every character is good.

Chapter 190 is full of toxins, watch it if you can resist it. Those born in the 190s are all poisonous and will not stop at all. Get rid of the invincible flow.

Good looking, but a bit lacking. Overall it looks pretty good so far, no plot issues. The plot is complex and changeable, with the warmth of father and daughter, the passion of online novels, the cruelty of the world of immortality, and some funny plots. It is worth watching.

The author is good at writing, and the description of some magnificent scenes makes people feel as if they are on the scene. However, the protagonist's emotional line is a bit delayed. However, the protagonist's character is destined to be single for a long time, which is reasonable. Now that I see it, I realize that I am a bit off topic. The protagonist does not rely on his daughter. In fact, the whole story is about the apprentice and his daughter relying on the protagonist's shock to develop step by step. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Overall it's pretty good, but there are a lot of problems. The author's narrative skills are very similar, the only problem lies in the content. The realm is stagnant and has not reached the peak, giving people a feeling that it is just a little bit behind. The protagonist is not a virgin, but it cannot be said to be decisive in killing. Some people may complain about why they don't kill them all. Personally, I don't think the battle is exciting. Some places are poisonous, stuck in the realm, falsely invincible, rewarded with experience cards after exhausting tasks, signing in and practicing for more than 12 million years, only 3,000 can be used, and most of the rest are used as consumables, etc., But for me I have long been immune, so it is harmless. In summary, it's pretty good in my eyes, but if you feel that you have a weak ability to withstand poison points, you can take a closer look. I think it's pretty good. When I watched it, I didn't feel anything too poisonous for me to accept. Of course, the final feeling depends on the individual. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers. The author is great. I think his writing style and narrative skills are very good, but there are some problems with the content. Maybe it's because the author has a few chapters a day that the content isn't polished very well. But at this update rate, it doesn't matter if the content is a little subpar, I agree with it anyway. Give me five stars to encourage you. I feel like your writing is better than mine [Chigua]