The Outcast: Lightning in My Left Hand, Samadhi True Fire in My Right

Are you so picky? I think this book is the most suitable fanfic for me. Except that it's a pity that it doesn't start with the perfect rescue of Sister Baoer when she just came out of the cave, the rest is really good! The disadvantage is that the various spells are relatively weak...

I personally feel very good that the other characters are really not as decisive as the protagonist of this book. I see no problem with the plot, and this is the only one I have read! ! Get Sister Baoer's! ! ! Not one of them! So you guys understand [laughing evilly][top post]

I'll give it four stars first, because the male protagonist is a bit humble and a bit similar to Zhang Chulan, but it's acceptable. The main reason is that there are too few chapters. Five stars feels a bit too much. So far, the writing is pretty good. Let's see the follow-up. If it can be maintained, I will make up for the five stars. The first part is good, but why is it written like this at the end? I mainly read harem stories, so when I come across harem stories, as long as they are not too bad, I basically give them four or five stars. At the beginning, I gave this book "Thoughts" because there were too few chapters to give it five stars, so I gave it four stars. I thought I would add another one later, but I forgot about it and only saw it in the past few days. Later, there will often be a phenomenon of forgetting the heroine and missing the heroine. If you can't write so many heroines, then you can write Bao Bao, Xia He, and Feng Shayan. There is no need to add so many heroines. If you write so many heroines, they will basically appear when you are collecting them, and they will never appear again after collecting them. So what did you include? You are still a passer-by in your life. You don't really think that writing like this is very artistic, do you? I just feel like I am a scumbag at the same time, and there are all kinds of jokes. I am not opposed to making jokes, but there is no need to make jokes just to write an update, right? A lot of jokes are forced onto the top, which is so embarrassing. 2024.11.3

The writing is quite good. I haven't seen any poisonous points so far. Good luck to the author [I learned it]

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

It's a good start, come on, author, keep it up, don't let it slip later, or you will become a guest after a while when you gain strength.

Personally, I think it's good, it's quite interesting. If you like it, you can check it out. After all, a thousand people have a thousand opinions on whether a novel is good or not.

Update soon. Just these 4 cars. No, it seems to be 5. Can Sister Baoer have more cars? It's really rare

It looks good. The author can keep up the quality and update it twice a day. He can also keep updating the unfinished content. Good luck to the author! ! !

When I first read the synopsis, I thought it was going to be a heroine who couldn't fight against a time-traveling girl, which would be a bit frustrating, but I didn't expect that I felt really comfortable after reading it. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and smart, can afford to take things on, and does not give opportunities to scumbag men. They are very knowledgeable and have an online IQ, so they will never suffer. 2. Jiang Yan, not too thorough, I will sigh after reading it. 3. The writing is solid, the description is detailed and vivid, and the beauty of ancient literature is combined with the experience. It is comfortable, yes, I am short of words and can't describe it, but it is a very comfortable feeling. I think it's not a loss to invest in shares.