National Fate: Starting with the Heavenly Fire Judgment, I Shock the World

I wanted to give it 4 stars and then say it was too little, but there was nothing I could do about it. Alicia once again responded to people's expectations.

Interesting, but your start is a bit long.

That's great, but can it reflect Honkaimon's genes? It would be better if it has horns.

After reading it so far, I only have one suggestion. If you really want the male protagonist to meet a girl, don't get involved with her. To be honest, you have worked with the Thirteen Heroes of Chaoshuo for a cycle. Not to mention other things, it is indeed a bit difficult to conquer your lover's Alicia. Eden, Ah Ponia, and Alicia's mature threesome all won at the same time. It's hard to be a human being. He can easily get slapped by Brother Zie when he secretly fools Ying. V2v is too out-of-touch and can't find his true self. It's all out of the question. It's too dangerous to be in a bed that's afraid of snakes. Little Gracie will be torn apart by the other twelve people easily, but isn't there still a cat? The shape of the can basically shows that the cat is here. It would be great to capture the cat with both deception and threats [smile]

My Ellie, you died so miserably! Wuwu[cry][cry][cry] Let the songs that no one sings sing again. Write a new chapter for the story that has been forgotten by history. A noble and pure soul embarks on a journey. May the plundering beasts love you and protect you, and grant you the freedom of "empty dreams". May the feathers of Duchen love protect his body and grant him the perseverance of "floating life". May the scroll of the painted world bless him with love and grant him the innocence of "stars". May the world-devouring snake love and protect his body and grant him "infinite" desires. May the Whistle of Dawn love him and grant him the will of "Rising Light". May the Inch-Breaking Blade love you and grant you "momentary" determination. May the love of the good Dharma protect his body and grant him the wisdom of "God's Wisdom". May the love of bad calamity bless his body and grant him the sincerity of "violent destruction". May the Box of Foolish Plays love you and grant you the miracle of "Spiral". May the song of brilliance bless his body and give him the brilliance of "gold". May the love of deep sin bless his body and grant him the love of "precepts". May the Emberless Sword love him and grant him the ideal of "salvation". May the flawless people love you and bless you, and grant you the return of your "true self". We hereby praise the birth of the Herrscher of the Origin. "My song will touch your forehead like the kiss of blessing." "When you are alone, it will sit beside you and whisper to you; when you are in a crowd, it will protect you from the noise." "My song will become the wings of your dreams, and it will carry your heart to the edge of the unknown." "When the night covers your path, it becomes the faithful starlight shining above your head." Thus, the story of "Origin" comes to an end Thus, the story of "Shiyuan" begins "It ends with me..." Start with me...

It's good-looking. Even if I haven't read the original work, I can still understand the characters described by the author. I won't feel OOC or forceful about the characters. For someone like me who wants to understand Beng Beng Beng, but after downloading it and taking a quick look... Well, I can't understand it at all. Just perfect for cloud players

Big cheers for the author Please update me soon. [Angry][angry][angry][angry]

Very nice, cheers author

It looks good. Does it have multiple heroines? I like multiple heroines. @ Can you let people from the collapsing world come over?

Try to update a few chapters a day. As for this matter, um, I've read too many novels, so I'm talking about it.