Honkai Impact 3Rd: Super Veliona

After searching for a long time, I finally found a book with Hei Xi as the main character. The writing is also very good. However, I am a student party and don't have many gifts to give, so I can only send a few yuan regularly and send electricity for love [crying] Why is he only 7.6?

The characterization is good but the plot may be a little lacking

Good, very good, very good, good-looking, love to read, keep reading, but there are too few of them now, although there are more than 4,000 in one chapter [currently in progress]

Very well written. And I like the subject matter very much. After all, I have been looking for a book about Xier for a long time. Some have been discontinued. I hope it doesn't break for the better.

Don't cut it, it's so beautiful [Adoration] [Cool]

How long? Beng San finally has a new masterpiece.

I really like this book, and it has a lot of words. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! ! Moreover, there are very few people writing about Xier. Many of them have stopped updating. I hope the author will not stop updating.

In terms of plot: more daily life, I really like Hei Xier being pushed back by Bai Xier Rhythm: The narration rhythm of the main plot is a little off, mainly because the emotional line is too good, so the preparation for the main plot is too poor. These five stars include the eight-star emotional line, but the main plot can only be counted as three stars, so the overall five stars, after all, everyone has what they are good at and what they are not good at. Personal suggestion: Optimize the foreshadowing of the main chapter and maintain the emotional line. The main chapter is the long-term existence of the work, and the emotional line ultimately only serves the main line. This is the first time I've posted so many comments. I don't want people to comment on this good book because it's just that. [Laughs]

It's totally not enough. Send more. Send more.

It's very interesting, but I just hope that scrambled eggs don't get blocked for some reason. I've had doubts and anger before, so why shouldn't a book that can arouse emotions be a good book? Full of expectations, three updates a day is best, but it's not a requirement, just keep updating. I hope more people will pay attention and give it a mid-range rating. High scores in the early stage will attract people with data, lower scores in the mid-term will guarantee people, and low scores in the later stage will guarantee people. Tomatoes are urinary, it's good for everyone to know👌🏻.