The Outcast: Wang Ye Is My Younger Brother?!

I have read many artist fanfics, and this one is undoubtedly the best, but it is a bit slow.

So far, there are no mistakes in the chapters except for some problems with the character description of Feng Baobao. It is still very good for a new author. You can see from my homepage that I am a bookworm and have a very picky mouth. I have given low ratings to many books, but this one is different. The protagonist is not the Teddy, Madonna, or Diaosi in other books. This is already very good. There is a wise man downstairs who probably has a junior high school diploma and can't understand anything and just makes random comments. I almost didn't read the book because of his comments at first. After reading it, I found that all the comments he posted were folded. If you don't have the ability to understand, don't read the book [awkward laugh]

Awesome, this is the coolest fanfic I've seen so far.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will produce more works. The only flaw is that the ending is too hasty. But I still hope everyone will watch it carefully. The writing is really good. I hope everyone will support the author more.

It's good to watch. Although the ending is a little rushed, it's good without delaying the plot. (But Lu Huan is a little bit wrong. He seems to be about the same age. Of course, it may be normal for couples with a larger age gap, but if we go back in time, it seems to be a bit early [cover] Face] It's normal in reality, but when I read the novel, I feel that the timeline is a bit early.) There is nothing bad except for the rushed ending. Especially I remember that one section was an hour, and then it was said to be half an hour. I felt that this novel can be read, and he will not fool the readers by writing randomly.

Very good. I didn't skip any of them. I thought it was time travel. In fact, it was me. It was just the system that saved my life. From beginning to end, it was all for my girlfriend, and my girlfriend was also for him.

It looks good so far, nothing particularly bad, but it's not particularly attractive, and the emotional and hidden lines between the male and female protagonists are not very clear yet. Hmm... It sucks! ! ! ! The male protagonist's emotional line is simply the downfall of this book! It's so nonsensical, and no one really doubts how the male protagonist learned the Fenghou Qimen! ! ! !

The ending is a bit hasty, but overall it's good. The male protagonist improves too quickly, which is why the book only has more than a hundred chapters. I feel that if there is more description of the ending, the book will be improved to a higher level. Overall, it's not bad. You can read it.

It's good to watch, it's good to watch. I liked it very much. When I first watched it, I thought that the male protagonist had found a new female protagonist and then stopped watching. But now that I want to watch it again, I realize that I misunderstood it [laughing and crying]

The writing is quite good. I don't think there is any need to give Zhang Chulan face. This is too pretentious. He always plots this and that. There is no need to give him too much face.