Western Fantasy: A Frail Mage's Road to Redemption

In some ways, you've used a similar premise to your previous book (transmigrating into a character in a game world) (although it's been a while and I can't remember the details, I still have a general feel for it). While I don't know why, it felt a bit strange to me (maybe I was sick, or maybe you were a little rusty in the early stages), it wasn't as enjoyable as the previous book.

The author's attention to detail remains excellent. I just hope the power levels don't get inconsistent. And don't let the protagonist's power increase too quickly.

There are some flaws, but it's indeed very well written. The flaws don't detract from the overall quality; the characters are vividly portrayed, and there are no major weaknesses. I look forward to the sequel and hope the author will speed things up (while maintaining quality). If the author dedicates themselves to refining and improving the quality, I'll be very excited.

It's always like this; every time I discover a good book, it's only had a few chapters updated... [Pouting]

It's well-written, but some of the transitions feel a bit abrupt. The protagonist is too weak, and the power levels are vague. I suggest a hierarchical system, such as a level 1 mage (levels 1-10) or a low-level swordsman (levels 1-10). Otherwise, the protagonist feels useless. The plot is also slow, with infrequent updates, feeling like a snail's pace.

So far, it's pretty good. The characters haven't fallen apart, and the plot is fairly smooth. I just don't know how the romance will go, since many good books have had their ratings dragged down by messy romantic subplots… I came from the no-romance section, and this is a book recommended by someone, so I hope this quality continues. Of course, it would be even better if it could be improved further.

I personally think it's pretty good. All the characters are intelligent, and there are no forced plot points in the current 60+ chapters. The only abrupt thing is when the game is mentioned. As long as there are no more player-related content later on, this book should be fine.

It's alright. Although the plot is a bit cliché, and the characters rely entirely on the system for power, at least they all have some intelligence, and there aren't any truly terrible parts. It looks like it's going to develop into a harem story. I hope you can better develop each character's personality and make the plot more innovative. Keep it up! [Requesting more updates]

I'm following the author's previous book; I hope this one isn't too short or too fast.

I thought the logical structure was quite good, so why did it stop updating? I only realized at the end that the author hadn't updated for a year 😢