Western Fantasy: An Otherworldly Girl’s Path to Becoming a Villain

The villainous daughter ✗ Cowardly servant ✓

Very well written. Personally, I have three points of dissatisfaction. One is that I am still attached to Avril. Su clearly positions himself as a subordinate, but he still has delusions. Especially in this second life, I think it should not be the case. But then I thought about it, some people enjoy the care of their ancestors, and it doesn't matter if their parents don't love them. Some people just long for the love of their parents. People are different. What's more, this text is not a cool text that feels good at first glance. It may be said that there are changes in the other world, but it is weak and incomplete, and the awareness is not enough, so it is not so demanding. The second point is that the ideological struggle is with the monsters, not the humanoid species. The ability to empathize is very good, but I don't think it is necessary to empathize with Warcraft. What's more, dirty methods were used when managing Avril Lavigne's industry and business competition. Such descriptions are quite redundant. Regardless of whether Su subjectively believed that the moral pressure of decision-making was on Avril, when humanoid life was taken away or humanoid life was destroyed, psychological pressure also existed. The weight of humanoid life must be greater than the weight of Warcraft life. It makes no sense that you don't have the burden when you kill people, but you do when you kill monsters. The third point is the division of formula. This is unbearable. The formula is original and exclusive, and there are no similar competing products, so the share is only one thousandth? I have never seen such a low investment in technology, and I think I look down on wine. What's more, it also comes with a low-grade formula. This is a business deal, so I can't tell Su's business ability. I can only think that the success of a restaurant depends purely on magical status and new products. But when a small shop opens in the capital, there are no powerful people trying to steal the recipe. I think the factor of magical status can be eliminated. If you don't want to portray Su as having strong business ability, that's okay. Everything else is pretty good. Su's personality is quite gentle, and she shows that she helps others, puts herself in others' shoes, is equal, works hard, is friendly, is good at discovering the strengths of others, is brave, etc. It can be seen that this is supposed to be a long story. I feel that there are a lot of foreshadowings that have not been written out. The map is also very large. I am looking forward to the following chapters.

Before the academy chapter, the protagonist lived a very powerless life. After entering the academy chapter, the protagonist has his own strength, partners and more knowledge, and he looks forward to the follow-up. Also hope to see more posts in the future.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was about an uprising to liberate the slaves, but when I opened it, it turned out to be about a marriage between a Western fantasy family and climbing up the ladder.

It's quite good-looking. It's probably the type of character that grows from weak in the early stage to independent and strong in the later stage. I hope the growth process won't be too frustrating, otherwise it will be difficult to persist until the later stage. I am still looking forward to this kind of later plot, I will continue to watch it and don't stop updating 🙂. By the way, does the author make a living from this? I'll try my best not to interrupt you and come up with ideas [what]

I think it's really beautiful! The setting of the heroine cultivating immortality in a western fantasy world is very interesting and novel [Sending my heart] The author is really amazing! But there are also minor issues, such as the occasional misnomer in a small part. But it basically doesn't affect reading. Big cheers for the author! ❤️💕

At the beginning of the rape scene, in the second chapter, Avril Lavigne hurt Warner to death. Now that he has been lying down for many chapters, will Warner wake up?

It's a very good book. The characters' emotions are described delicately, and their actions are logical. The world view is also self-explanatory. The only drawback is probably that the pace is a bit slow and the lack of excitement in the early stages makes it a bit uninteresting. However, as long as you can read it patiently, it is still interesting. A very important question is when did the protagonist Tutu those nobles? Don't wait until the finale to settle the matter. These clowns keep dancing in their faces, which really ruins the perception.

Overall, it's okay, but Western Fantasy + Immortal Cultivation is a bit awkward and somewhat inconsistent. I still prefer pure swords and magic 😂

The three views are very upright, and it is not a brainless bias towards the heroine. The writing process