After I, the Senior Disciple, Heard My Fellow Disciples' Inner Thoughts

This novel gives me the feeling that it is refreshing but also funny and lively. Other novels about male cultivators can't match this feeling. The male protagonist's character is particularly smart. I really love it. Also, why did I read this book so early? Why! ! !

It's well written, imaginative, and the plot is exciting. I hope it won't be messy or eunuch in the future. The subject matter is novel. I don't understand what the follow-up is for. It lacks a main line and feels like the outline is unfinished... If it is a daily joke, it is not bad, but if I want to do it later, I always feel that Ye Aotian is too weak, too useless and has no brains. He is not like a villain... It is recommended to strengthen it, but overall it is easy and funny and suitable for this book. Thousands of people have different opinions. This is just my opinion. I don't say it must be like this. Everyone should watch rationally and comment in a civilized manner. Wish the author good fortune and prosperity Wish viewers a happy smile

It's good-looking, and indeed a bit funny. The author will continue to maintain the quality [please update]. And when will Senior Sister Luo get her wish? Do you want to become yandere [laughing]

It really looks good, nothing too shocking, but the world view is a bit confusing: the current story has four directions: novel, game, before rebirth and now. According to the original novel, the role of senior brother is marginal (it does not rule out that the fourth junior sister does not read the book carefully). But according to the description of the game and the previous life, the role of senior brother is quite important, and the novel the original male protagonist sent collapsed. I am very confused about the direction of the next story. I hope the author can round it out better. After all, there are not many interesting novels. Come on, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's interesting. I've seen so many people who have their minds read, but this is the first time I've seen a mind reader. Come on! , Even though there are too few updates, it's not enough to watch.

It is recommended not to read it. If you want to read it, it is best to wait until it reaches 300,000 words, otherwise you will enjoy the pain of catching up on updates! ! ! It's very funny. This novel, especially his comedy, is not vulgar comedy. Anyone who can read it will find it very funny~ My only regret now is that I came in too early to read it. It only has more than 100,000 words, which is not enough to read, not enough at all! ! ! !

The characters in the article are vivid and have different personality traits. The plot is compact, pleasant and relaxing, and the subject matter is interesting and worth watching. The number of words is too few and there are some deficiencies. I hope the author can add more words. I can't help myself after watching the latest, and I can't sleep at night to update more quickly. (Five-star praise is given [please update])

Overall, it's quite interesting, especially now with the support of AI dramas, the character modeling is great. In addition, this book also fits my impression of it. It's funny and invincible, the logic is reasonable, and the strength of the protagonist team is not compromised online. I saw the knife. Alas, I can't stand this. I can't figure out my position. Comedy writing should be very funny. It has to be high-level and the emotional value of the swordsman. If you want to do it this way, the early content should be reflected, instead of suddenly changing the style of writing three-fifths of the way. I can't figure out why the reader is reading this book. Three stars for the book. One star is for the AI drama.

The five-star review is here! The author will update soon! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The characters of the protagonist group are well established and fixed, and it is very fun. Now the basic story is to slowly reveal the protagonist group's past and present personal storylines, and why they are entangled together. I am curious (1. Is the protagonist a person outside the ending story line, using the script of (protagonist time traveler), to come to this story (elder brother) as a character (referred to as soul travel). () 2. Or is it that the original protagonist has traveled through time many times, so there are so many similar stories in previous lives). The second type is a more normal story selection outline. The first type is more difficult to write, but you can write the feeling that the protagonist is a real outsider and helps this (elder brother) in this world. In this way, you can write a lot of flowers about the theme of not wanting to be the elder brother. The second type is almost a little tied to the feeling that only you can be the elder brother. The pace of this book is good and not slow, and it is not a love book. There is a relationship in the past life, and there are more or less entanglements with the master in several lives. Although it is all hints, it doesn't seem poisonous as long as you don't find out whether it is a harem or a single woman. It is also well written in that there is not too much ambiguity. Almost everyone will avoid it under the setting of hearing about the past life or hearing the voices of one's own junior brothers and sisters, so it feels very good. Mainly for watching complaints and some fun. You can see a lot of the author's thoughts and imagination. It's a very good story and I look forward to updating it soon.