Peking Opera Cats: Frost Sugar

After reading the previous chapters, the author's ideas are very thoughtful [note], but the rhythm of the plot is a little rushed. There are too many words used in the original plot [shocking], and the added parts have the meaning of being passed over in one stroke. This gives the reader a feeling that it has changed but not much [face covering]. The author can add some descriptions from different angles, such as environment, feeling, psychology, etc., And the story will be much more exciting. [Like][Like][Like] For example, will the appearance of Sister Bai Shuang bring any new impact on Xingluoban? Will you meet Da Fei out to buy groceries in the town? How will Tang Ming's decision change when dealing with a crisis? What different results will there be? Then speed up or slow down the strengthening of a certain aspect of Xingluoban, This led to a series of subsequent changes. [Thinking] In order to make up for the regrets in the Peking Opera Cat (or add two knives) [make a face][make a face][make a face] In this way, I believe the heat will come up soon, come on! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Give five stars first to encourage

The characters are not OOC and the plot is reasonable. I just don't know what is Bai Shuang's strength level? (´･_･`)

It's very interesting. This is the best article I've ever read about people who traveled through time and became a member of Baitang's family. The writing is good, and it's also funny and educational. I wonder if the title can be a bit more innovative [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] I really don't understand why it only scores 6.9?

As a fan of Peking Opera Cats, I feel really good. The author's writing style basically follows the original animation. When I first watched it, I was worried that the author would be Black Star Roban, but it turned out not to be the case. I feel very good. It seems that Bai Shuang's strength is not clearly explained, and the update seems to be unstable. I hope the author can work hard Another question that comes to mind is that it would be better if Bai Shuang has a greater influence on the plot.

I give you 5 stars. As long as you have faith, you will definitely succeed.

It's okay, the subject matter is quite novel, but the protagonist has little impact on the plot. I still hope to innovate some plots and not always revolve around Bai Tang. After all, it's not just Bai Tang who is the protagonist.

Ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's been 24 years, why hasn't the author updated it yet? It's obviously so beautiful! Woohoo~ Will I be able to see the end in my lifetime?

Author: Don't dig holes, this is my favorite book since I first planted tomatoes p

Yes, yes, this book is quite good.

Come on, it looks great. It's the better one I've seen so far