The Broken World: The Devouring Judgment Angel

The character of the protagonist is very special, and the perspective is different from other books. It has potential, but it would be better if the story line is more clear, and the writing style can be improved a little. Finally, the car is going so fast, we have to get off! [Crazy]

It's very well written. Some people can accept the protagonist's behavior of handing out benefits without wearing any clothes. Some people can't accept this. You need to pay attention to this.

It's quite good to watch, I like this kind of plot that is lively and not boring [please update]

It's pretty cool. I guess the protagonist was created by the Thirteen Heroes in order to fight against the End. But because the End of the previous civilization is coming soon, we can't let her develop and leave her for the next civilization. After all, she can get stronger as she fights and has the help of all the Heroes [Thinking]

It's okay, I think it looks good [eating melon]

Won the Easter match, Wuhu! [Blowing kiss]

After reading it, I found it very interesting. The previous plot was very good, but after Ellie came out, I felt that the author started to let himself go. Of course, the current writing is also wrong. I personally think that Ai Li is a helpful plug-in for grandpa, which is different from a pure system. I hope the author can control it. If you are not careful, you may go astray along the way. It is indeed much better than most of the illogical and illogical writings on Bengsandong currently available on Tomato. So far you can watch it with confidence

I'm so good at writing, but it's too late to update. I really love and hate it.

I don't dare to raise it at all, for fear of being banned one day.

Very good, good luck to the author!