The Host Has No Will to Survive

It's really good, but the chapter names are a bit strange, and the people listening to the book are a bit uncomfortable. I suggest changing it to school bully instead of bully. I suggest you ask for my opinion, but you can also use it without it [facepalm]

Hehehehe~ Mom dug out my eyes My sister sawed off my hand Dad chopped off my legs From now on, all I have left is my body~ They don't love you, but someone will. The love of friends is love, the love of lovers is also love, and the love of parents is just a part of so many loves. Life is complete with it, and life can be lived without it, but it's just a little lacking. But it doesn't matter, there will always be someone who will love you more, and the love he gives you will outweigh the pain caused by all the losses, so you don't have to worry about why they don't love you, maybe they are just waiting for someone to love you more. People who don't love you will ignore their feelings, so you don't have to love them either. And those who love you will care about every bit of you [love] [love] [love]

It's good-looking, but it feels weird when I'm reading it. How can I put it this way? When I write, I focus on the words and sentences when the characters speak. It feels weird to treat them as real people. It can be seen that the author has just written, and the author can treat it as a real world and real characters when writing. Also, the sense of composition is a bit strong, and some places are too detailed (like the protagonist talking about his family relationship to the recipient). Like writing paragraphs, in fact, the novel It doesn't need so much embellishment (mix it with a corresponding and advanced sentence), tell a story from the perspective of a certain protagonist (telling something to a friend) so that you won't feel awkward when reading it, and then there is no need to write out the character traits of the protagonist, because you can see it when you write the plot, just like you understand your friends. In fact, you just need to read more other novels. The plot written by the author is actually quite good. I believe you, come on [get it]

The whole process is highly sweet, no cruelty, and the sugar content exceeds the limit of sweetness. It is my favorite and almost everyone's favorite. I hope it won't jump in the future.

Actually, it's not bad, but I can only say that it is completely different from the introduction and title of the book. . . . . There are mainly two points: ①The title and title gave me the feeling that the male protagonist is a person with not very strong desires, but I watched more than half of it, and that feeling never appeared. I have been looking forward to it, but well, it didn't happen at all, and the meaning of the title of each part is different. Even the original character or his subsequent feelings have nothing to do with the title. This makes me particularly strange. [What] ② It refers to some characters or other descriptions, which refer to the form of dialogue between characters. For example, A said how good-looking the protagonist is, but what A said is too blunt, like some more objective descriptions, but after all, it is a person, the author's long description, and too many modifications make the paragraph look heavy and stiff, and it will also bring visual fatigue. [Grievance] In the end, the overall feeling is that this is a sweet pet article, which has nothing to do with the title or the title of the article. I hope the author can work hard and not go off topic. I can only give it 3.5 Stars, so I rounded it up and gave it four stars [face covering]

Oh my god! So sweet! So sweet to me! Not cruel at all! So sweet, so sweet! Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! !

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Very pretty! Really (//∇//) your writing style is very good.

In the first world, Yanyan was still pure and cold, writing a little bit away from the world. After passing the first world (or in the middle), he slowly started to become a little dependent on Gong, which really makes people feel warm in their hearts (⑉••⑉)‥♡. The writing is okay, the emotion is okay, and it's sweet, HE! ! ! Nice [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss ][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]

It's good to read, please give the author a boost💪 and continue to update [Sending heartfelt wishes]