Pokemon: I Became Champion with the Sign-In System

The writing is very good, I think the details of the characters are well written. But the author sometimes misses a few words in his writing. [Laughing awkwardly]

It's okay, but I feel like Harry is just like the Beast Boy in the original book. Did the author forget one thing? Latias can be captured with a Poke Ball and then released. If you don't go in, you can't go in. Otherwise, even if it follows you, others can subdue it, because it is considered a wild Pokemon. Even Ash's Pikachu has a Poke Ball, but it just doesn't go in. If a mythical beast like Latias doesn't need a Poke Ball to capture it, be careful of strong people grabbing it.

Are you playing games? You're pretty good at it.

It's well written, but why no one has it? [Laughs evilly]

There is a feeling of eyes lighting up

Too short, didn't hear enough

Few comments, I like it