Pokemon: Setting Sail in Hoenn

Isn't it cool that the author's two heroines, Xiaoguang and Sirona, have mature sisters?

The single heroine supports Sirona Otherwise, there would be no cp, and it would be good to write about the bond between Xiaozhi and Pokémon.

Pretty good, but don't forget Serena as the heroine.

I sincerely hope that Xiaozhi has a cp in the Sinnoh region, either Xiaoguang or Bamboo Basket is fine, as long as it's not Serena [shy]

Oh, dear author, this is really great. I hope you can continue to stick with it. The character descriptions in the book are also very good. I haven't read this kind of book for a long time since the book was discontinued. Come on! ! ! !

Hmm... The overall outline is pretty good, so I chose the chapter about the Glam Contest because I really like the Glam Contest, but I feel that the author may have misunderstood the meaning of the Glam Contest a little bit. I think the Glam Contest is a place to show the charm of Pokémon. I feel that Ash may not be suitable for the Glam Contest? I feel that the charm of Pokémon is not fully displayed. The visual effects caused by some moves may be really good, but the charm of Pokémon itself is not highlighted. Just like Koudian misinterpreted the gorgeous contest in a few episodes, she only cared about the gorgeousness of the moves and did not show the charm of Pogaman and Pachilitz. However, later she was inspired by Xiaowang and made a breakthrough, understanding the meaning of the gorgeous contest. I feel that Ash's participation in the Gorgeous Contest is somewhat based on the solid strength of Pokémon. It feels weird (?) That Ash is more suitable for ordinary Pokémon battles (in my opinion). Maybe it's because of the parallel world. I feel that Ash's image has changed a lot. Readers who like strong strength may prefer reading this Pokémon fanfic. The above is purely my personal opinion. The ratings are based on the chapters of the gorgeous contest. I have not read the entire book, so I'm sorry! (Don't fight, you are right. Don't curse me and don't curse my family. The curse will bounce back on your family! Buddha bless you!)

They're all good, but that's not why I gave them four stars. Team Rocket has actually disbanded, or why don't you just bring them back to us?

How to say it? It's a very realistic world. I saw a different side of animation. I think it's very beautiful. It talks about those things in life and the insidiousness and cunning. Also, the growth of the children behind Zhiguang and the others is particularly interesting.

Okay, okay, author, you can also write some branches yourself

Such good authors don't come around very often.