Pokemon: A Shiny Gyarados from the Start

Come on, author, you wrote well [smile][smile]

Although the writing is not very good, it is my own book after all. To be honest, I don't know how long it will last, maybe. . . I am the author of this book, and I want to give myself a negative review. When you see this review, you don't need to read it. This was my first book, and it was a mess. It was full of mistakes and no one read it. As a person who wants to write novels to earn some instant noodles, it is undoubtedly not feasible. Dreams always run counter to reality, so I can only give up this book. If I can't even afford food, I won't have the strength to talk about dreams. Here I would like to thank those readers who have supported me before. Thank you very much. Of course, I owe you, and everyone, a complete story, and I will make it up, so I opened a new elf book. If you are lucky enough to see this, you can click on my homepage to see my works, thank you.

The writing is very good and I am very happy to read. The content is also good. As long as I keep reading, I will reach the finale. Come on, the author, don't break the story and don't dig holes. Otherwise I will send you the blade. [Smile]

Come on, it's well written.

Good writing, keep it up

It's well written, but too short.

The storyline is rather interesting. Keep up the good work!

After reading the previous part, urban elf novels, I thought it was okay. I also asked if there would be a female protagonist [Chigua] (I personally hope there will be a female protagonist).

Not bad, not bad. I like it very much.

Personally I think it's pretty good