
Harry Potter: An Utterly Ordinary Secret Crush
【HP】一场平凡无奇的暗恋
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It's really well written, the male protagonist is James, and he's an unpopular character but he's a masterpiece. To be honest, HP's CP is really difficult to dismantle, and some of the original heroine stories are really hard to read. Snape's dislike of Lily will lose the core of the character in the original work. Too many people have written Sirius the same thing a thousand times, Malfoy has been imagined by too many people, and Voldemort really can't bear to look at it in the later period. I would rather see a male protagonist with less description in the original novel. James' character is really likable, and his shortcomings are not ignored like other James novels. This article can make all the characters not flat, which is really rare. It reminds me of the Raiders in the Orange Light game, but this is most likely because he is too healing.
The author's writing style is really great, and James' character fits the character very well. Most importantly, it really fits the setting of a secret love! Sonia's Secret Love is really great, a very, very, very good story that combines plot and emotion! [The person I like is a pushy person. He is kind, passionate, just, reckless, and maybe biased, but this is the person I admire. I like best the moment when I stand on the edge of the crowd and watch people surround him and throw him up in the middle.] ["No, he steals the limelight every moment." Sonia said with a smile, but her eyes were fixed in his direction, "He is good at this."] [James, I am destined for disaster in my life. [Ah, I really like him, really. [The boy I like, he has magic power. Of course, he is a wizard, and his magic power is unmistakable. I mean, he has the kind of magic power that can make people happy together. [I like James Potter, I will always like him. ——Sonia
What a treasure! It's rare to see James x the original girl's article, there is a feeling of youthfulness, ignorance, and ambiguity and sweetness... James, you boy, hit the ball hard and hit the ball hard! ! When I saw Nia last night, who is of mixed Chinese and English descent but didn't particularly emphasize the Chinese elements, I really, really liked it! Then the Stranger Things party discovered the name Hope—Two Chefs went wild with ecstasy! ! Really delicious, so perfect that I ate 300 bowls of it in a row🥹🥹It's so delicious that I love to eat it in big mouthfuls🥹🥹🥹
Two words: beautiful! I was attracted to it at the beginning by the male protagonist (oh my god, I have never seen the male protagonist be James Potter! And he doesn't hate Lily). After reading it, I felt very moved. The author's writing style is very good, and he really wrote about the feeling of secret love... Sour and sweet at the same time. And the heroine is also very powerful (✪▽✪), sassy, smart, and thoughtful. It must be well received! ! ! This book has been included in my reading list. Come on (ง ˙o˙)ว[][][]
Real! Of! Roar! Roar! Look! The author describes the direct relationship between Nia and James very delicately. It's the kind of sweetness that makes the corners of the mouth curl up unconsciously when you look at it. It can be seen that the feeling between them is gradually increasing. From the beginning, Nia has a crush on James, to James starting to be interested in Nia, to slowly liking it, to confessing, step by step, it really makes the corners of my mouth fly to the sky. It's so sweet. The second point is reasoning! This is really a blast! Nia's political acumen comes from the influence of her family. Here are two more sweet spots! When do I think James started to like Nia? ! Have you guessed what I want to say? Everyone! It's a secret room incident! James saw another side of Nia there, and he should have been attracted to her at that time, kid. The second sweet spot is, have you discovered it? No matter what Nia says, James will listen carefully and respond! Help, I really like this kind of man! Give me one, Merlin! Going back to what I said about politics and reasoning, the charm of the character Nia itself! She is calm, protective, but emotionally stable! (This point is very important to me! Because I am emotionally unstable!) She is very capable and has a big picture view. She can deduce the general plot based on only some details. I have to say that if Harry had her, he would kill Voldemort alone (a bit exaggerated, sorry). Well, that's all for today. In short, it is worth recommending! Good friends, after the last comment, I began to look forward to the next one more and more, but not only for the sweet love between Nia and James, I began to wonder how the author would describe the pitfalls of Nia traveling through the black hole. Really, so curious, and beautiful. Now my evaluation of this book is not only good-looking, but among so many HP fans I have read, it is in the top three! I'm not kidding. An ordinary secret love, ah, the secret love is ordinary, but whether it is deducing Voldemort's Horcrux or the much older two-dimensional Nia that will be described next, it all seems not ordinary.
In fact, I think when I see this, I always feel that the heroine and James are in love with each other, and they are interested in concubine. On Tomato, books like this (themed on secret love) are really rare. But it's really pretty. It's really a pity that I didn't have a secret love in my youth. I especially like watching this kind of thing recently. HP secret love book. But I found two copies on Tomato. There is also a book called "HP Plum Rain" in which the heroine is the sister of Cedric the Hufflepuff. The male protagonists are the Weasley twins. It should be sandwich cookies. It's just that the author is slow to update. But the secret love written by the author is really touching. Those who are interested can go search it out.
I read them all in one day. What a great secret love story. The little mentality of Nia's secret love is well described [Like][Like]
I know this won't be my last hp, nor my first, but its place will never be replaced. I already liked Sonia very much before I had a clear idea of the so-called charm of the character. I replayed it every time - eight times so far! ——, There is a feeling of heart-filling satisfaction: Oh, it turns out that their lives can be like this, it turns out that this kind of thing can be solved in this way (I really wrote a lot about Sonia, I particularly like her way of dealing with things), it turns out that they are such people outside the original work, and their youth is not just a few words written by Rowling, but real, passionate, unparalleled, and can never be forgotten. Every person in the book is absolutely independent and completely real. This book is the one that really inspired me to fall in love with JP. Before this, all the James I saw had two sides, either a pure fool or a pure seer. Only in this book, James really gave me the feeling of, ah, this person is so interesting, I really want to get to know him. Brave, smart, has his own petty and evil intentions, has no reservations about his friends, is domineering (but maybe I have a filter like Nia, I think this kind of publicity is very cute and cute), and has another side that is difficult to get close to people I hate. What about pranks? Again, maybe I am always tolerant because I like James. Most of the shortcomings can be beautified by me into advantages or reasons for me to like him haha. But who says it can't be done? Those who like Snape can accept his oily head and oily nose as a Death Eater (I am not a character critic, this is the original content). What's wrong with me just doting on James... Besides, many of James' strengths are accompanied by shortcomings. Besides, I particularly like Mary. As a bystander, she sometimes seems a little thoughtless, but who can guarantee that she can think calmly like Nia when she is in this kind of situation? So Nia's personality charm is too strong. And it's really classy to like the Beatles, and it's also very cute to think about using Nia's photos to blackmail JP. The same goes for Lily. I really liked the story about about 20 chapters ago when James in the first grade tried to flick something to Lily but ended up in Nia's hand because Lily "couldn't bear to disturb others for her own sake." In the previous chapters, Lily privately asked Nia if she wanted her to accompany her to find Professor McGonagall. Little Angel Lily...🥺🥺I won't say much about Remus, but I really think this image is the best captured among all the HP fans I've seen on Tomato. The most important one, Sirius. Sirius's image is actually the one that HP has the hardest to grasp. I think he is not a complete Gryffindor, but he is not a typical Slytherin either. He grew up in an environment like the Black family. Even if he hates the Black family, he always has some of the characteristics of 'Black', even if it is a small part. This makes this person very complicated, and it is easy to deviate from his core charm when writing about him. It is this complexity and diversity that is the reason why I like him. And the ordinary secret love perfectly explains his person. He couldn't hate James just because he was with Nia. The word "hate" was even too strong. He couldn't even feel a little bit dissatisfied with James because he had experienced the beauty of James, so he knew that James was worth it. But he can't just calmly accept that the girl he likes is with his best brother. No one can be relieved in this situation, especially when these two people are very good. I can't let go. How can I talk about Sirius himself? This unique sourness of Sirius was so delicious. He was confident and perceptive, so he couldn't even say those four words, three words in English, that represented the courage of adolescent boys and girls when he noticed the difference between Nia and James. I just hate that this is not 1v2, but this is real. In short, everyone in Ordinary Secret Love deserves a good ending. I have never read a comprehensive series before, but this one is particularly good! And I personally think this is the most in-depth and thoughtful book on magic among the Tomato HP fanfics. It can look at the relationship between magic and wizards and Muggles from an angle I had never imagined. Thank you for starting a business and you will die. Will I be able to see another update in my lifetime? 🥺❤️❤️ It's like reading a diary of girlhood, secret love is sour.
It's really super, super, super, super beautiful! The heroine's IQ online is really very smart, and the theoretical analysis is really unexpected and reasonable, and the description of every little detail of the heroine's crush on James is really mind-numbing. I have never had a crush on anyone, but I really feel like this is what a crush on someone else is like! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]That's why when listening to books, I only read them offline. It's really not used to it. [Crying][Crying][Crying] I really didn't expect that there would be such a good-looking one. I really found a treasure. Now that I've watched it, I'm an old fan [Adored][Admired] Not enough, really not enough. When will the author release an update? I can't stand it anymore! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! It's really amazing👍[love][love]
It's particularly beautiful. The secret love is written very delicately and the emotional line is really beautiful. . . Watching Peter Pan made people's hearts sour. Jamie's assurance also made people's hearts tremble with sweetness. Sonia's plot setting was also very interesting. Every Sonia will fall in love with Jamie. The plot is also very attractive. . . I was shocked and loved by Sonia's intelligence and James was just as I imagined. . . I have been obsessed with it since I first saw it. This is the third time I plan to watch it again. . . No matter how many times I changed my account, I still remembered this divine article. In this cold pit, I had no choice but to persevere and read this book again and again. . . . Author, I beg you, please come back. . . . Can I give you a reward when you come back? I want to watch the rest of the plot. I feel like I am playing a big game. The setting is very interesting. I beg you, author, please come back, I beg you.