I Started Chasing Someone Else, and Made the Campus Beauty Cry

It's okay, as long as you don't get sick, you are basically a top-notch horse of this type, but I don't recommend mindless blackmail or mindless abuse of the school beauty. Many of these themes make people feel alienated because of mindless abuse.

It's pretty good. I've seen similar movies before, but they're not as good as this one.

Super good-looking and invincible, okay? Just when is it coming? Sure enough, women describe love scenes very well. If you wrote a female channel with several men chasing one woman, you might have become famous long ago. Men still prefer to upgrade to the dominance category. Women are just embellishments in life and will only affect the speed of drawing swords. Personally, I suggest you switch to the female channel. One chapter for the female channel is 1,000 words, and one chapter for the male channel is 2,000 words. And since you are so good at emotional dramas, write some rich and powerful family fights, and the deep palace family fights will definitely be explosive. Maybe the next Legend of Zhen Huan will be written by you! Awesome! The details are fine and the big picture is vague. You can also change it to criminal investigation horror, with a criminal investigation anatomy every ten chapters, or a horror story every ten chapters.

The writing is okay. It's just that there are too many repetitions of "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn". Luo Qingxue is just like Xiao Yu'er, but she's far worse than Xiao Yu'er. Jiang He is Shen Youchu. That Yiyi is Shang Yanyan. There should be a female rival in business in the future.

Excellent, I think this novel is quite good so far (don't criticize if you don't like it)

Recently, there have been quite a lot of books of this type. They basically stopped licking them, and then the girls got angry and chased them. Then there was a best friend next to him who gave an idea, but the parents did not want them to be together. Then there was a brother who took him to college together. Then he got admitted to the ideal college for a girl, got together with that girl, and then won the lottery, and started a business. Because there are too many books of this kind, and the plot is average. It might be better if there are some novel routines. Overall, this book is well written and the characters are vividly portrayed.

It's really nice, but the updates aren't enough. The character Zhang Fan has a personality and is not as straightforward as the male protagonists in some novels. The description of Jiang He in the early stage was a bit lacking. Also, wasn't it said that Jiang He kept a diary and had a secret love in his previous life? It seems that this aspect of Jiang He's plot was not reflected in the early stage. He started writing a diary in the first year of high school, but in the third year of high school, the emotion of secret love was not reflected (disadvantage) Only my personal opinion, light comment [top post][please update] I strongly support this book because it is good-looking

Now Tomato's books are all the same routine From rebirth to entrepreneurship to college entrance examination and college, during this period, I discovered the hidden beauty and Bai Yueguang regretted her previous life, and she must have a good brother (mostly fat) The pinnacle of this type of novel in my mind is that I really don't want to be reborn. It is more realistic, and there is no plot of husband abuse. The entrepreneurial experience and daily life are perfectly interspersed. The emotional description is also quite delicate, and I really learned something about the world of human beings, and it is not a traditional cool novel. , It should be fun and exciting (I am most impressed by the beginning of the second Shura Field and the commercial war with Samsung in South Korea), but I feel that it is almost impossible to publish such a masterpiece again. There is really no novel of the same type on the market that is as good as it. But the detailed description in this book is quite good. It can kill a piece of tomato. You can take a look at it.

Thank you, the author. To be honest, I am also a high school student. Those excerpts of emotions are really good. I couldn't understand them before, and I didn't understand what I didn't understand by watching videos. Now I understand. I wonder if the author has the same emotional experience as me. The writing is really good. Can you add me as a friend if you have the opportunity? In fact, I know, it's better to respect each other and understand each other. After all, the author is not a very experienced writer. Although there are flaws in the main plot, the detailed description is really amazing, not delicate or artificial.

It's short and weak. I saw the update in one go. The character model of the protagonist is very good. There is no indecision or bloody misunderstanding in the plot. It has the shrewdness of a businessman and a flexible bottom line. It is natural to switch between the roles of a businessman and an unholy lady. It is worth looking forward to updating soon.