Remember! Never Go to Sleep After Midnight!

It's a bit too fast to start high and low. The first few chapters are okay, but the perception plummets from the tenth chapter. I don't know whether it's because there is no outline or because I'm rushing to meet the word count. The plot is confusing, the characters begin to fall apart, and the original setting is of high quality and slow to develop. First of all, no one really cares about your original setting, especially now that it's been a few years. It's just the icing on the cake, telling a good story is the most important thing. I only watch a lot of high-quality and slow-burning stuff on Tomato. It's so funny, and it's not really high-quality and slow-burning. Slow-burning is just slow. When you're hot, not many people will watch it. You're either a eunuch or you're generating your own electricity for love. Where is the high quality? Arrangement of writing, character creation, and plot conception can only be considered qualified. Then you are still high-quality and slow to work. You treat readers as nothing but a slave, and you are willing to accompany you to appreciate your talent. When the time comes, you will complain when you have no profit. I really don't like you to write something but you can't write well. Bro, can you be more realistic and make readers happy first and then pursue your dreams? Otherwise, you will spend time and energy without getting anything in return. It really depends on your passion and writing for love. In terms of plot, the classic opening has the heroine disappearing, the hero looking for someone, relatives and friends offering sacrifices, the protagonist growing up, a well-written classic, and people will still read it. The first few chapters are indeed well arranged, and then problems are exposed. The heroine has no follow-up arrangements, and the plots are seriously separated. Slow-burning is not so slow. You write two million words, the world view is huge, the climax is intricate and orderly, the rhythm points are densely inserted, and there is enough writing to shape the characters. This is slow-burning.

The disadvantage is that some parts are very clever. For example, it is outrageous that the official does not know. How could the authorities handle so many incidents and not be able to connect them all? Sooner or later, there will be a few people who fall, just like the first time the police should be there, and as time goes by, there will always be senior officials who know about the fall. How could no one care about it at all? The emotional disorder of the protagonist is also not well written. It feels like I want to write a protagonist who has no emotions but has a radiant humanity. But the protagonist is a bit too emotional from beginning to end. It's not so much an emotional disorder but a middle-school boy who thinks he's ruthless.

This book is quite interesting! There's that feeling of mood swings too! But the biggest poisonous point of this book is that "absolute reason" can be affected by kindness???????? There is no description of schizophrenia in the protagonist's characteristics, but the protagonist's previous sentence does not follow the next sentence. The previous sentence should contact the authorities, and the next sentence tells the police not to stay up late [what] [what] [what] (then you are wanted, and you deserve it). Different camps??? Can't we get some police officers to join the camp? (If the author doesn't want to write something official, just pretend I didn't say it) You also want to do a little bit of poisoning for your parents to go bankrupt! The author describes the supporting characters, and it feels like playing the King of Humans and Machines (you will find that everyone's thoughts are the same point) hahahahaha, except that the protagonist has absolute reason to increase mental power and avoid pollution, it is not as quick as the little fat man's thinking. Hahahahaha, it makes me feel that the protagonist is one-sided...

It's very interesting. Hu Yue's suspense at the beginning brings out the reasonable and specific nature of the protagonist's emotional disorder, and the official CP achieves the purpose of joining the organization and actively falling into it. The logic of the plot development is quite good. It reads smoothly and has no flaws. The plot is also very novel. If I continue writing with the same theme, I feel that I can really compete with Zhan Shen. There are also many real-life connections interspersed with the rise in gold prices and the use of gold as weapons. Games and animations allow readers to better understand this aspect. This aspect is very praiseworthy. The plot development is also not sloppy. There is no messy dialogue or anything like that. There is also a pure relationship with the brother. The bottom line is adhered to. The character creation is also quite full. The foreshadowing of Wang Mang's story is very exciting. Such a protagonist who has a brain and can judge good and evil by himself is very likable. I hope the heroine will not be forced to hurt the hero and suffer from various misunderstandings between the two. It is very good that the opposite heroine can be smarter. It's really good! My mom, the reviews of other books are not very good😦 I hope they don't focus on men and women and improve the protagonist's self-esteem and suit the character.

After killing a few hours, I still have to delete it. What I wrote before was okay, but then it didn't suit me anymore. Dog blood + cruelty The heroine disappears at the beginning, and the protagonist tries to find her to start the extraordinary journey. Then the two good friends die, and one of them is still killed by the protagonist. . . Staying up late means falling into a dark world. The protagonist and his savior are misunderstood by the authorities as gangsters, which leads to the ruin of the protagonist and the protagonist's family. To be honest, this setting is too bad. In reality, there are at least nearly 100 million factories and food delivery jobs with night shifts. Ordinary people will die in three days, but the author may not have low-level work experience, so I don't know Next, the heroine's whereabouts were discovered by the extraordinary hero, but the heroine acted as the Riddler and just took the hero to another world. After seeing this, she didn't bother to read it.

This protagonist is so tolerable. If you like Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, you can watch it.

In the early stage, I felt that the subject matter was very novel. After Chapter 20, the mental hospital became the main force, and it started to be funny. When a private person collects gold on a large scale, do you think the country will not investigate it? He also robs gold and is wanted. Even if he has special powers, it is impossible not to be discovered. In the later stage, the appearance of rape is even more hilarious. Killing a few people is a mental illness. What are you afraid of directly threatening the Ministry of Education? The country will not know this is funny.

He was deceived into attacking his brother and even killed him, yet he was able to continue to be together safely and unharmed. It was unbelievable. He kept focusing on the train problem, saying that he would only choose those he cared about. What happened?

The subject matter of the novel is very novel, and the plot is very smooth, without any flaws or poisonous points. Compared with popular-themed novels or sadistic novels, this novel can be said to be very innovative. I looked at the first few pictures with half-understanding, but after seeing the later pictures, I realized that the previous pictures were all foreshadowing. There are some shortcomings. The protagonist's emotion in trying to save people after falling does not fit the character. There is nothing wrong with anything else. It's just that the fighting plot is a bit messy, so you need to watch it carefully, otherwise it would be easy to miss the fighting plot at a glance. Overall the sensory experience is very good.

I'm not looking forward to it at all. Goodbye. After about 20 chapters, the protagonist's personality is inconsistent, all the logic is confused, I don't know where the high quality is, and I don't know how the slow-burning is promoted.