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This is a fun pornographic book, but it is very comfortable to read and can make people laugh. I like this type of book very much.

Overall it's pretty good, but there are some areas that really need attention. . Cutting a fishing net underwater for 20 minutes? Auntie is here to go diving? . . Of course, I'm not a professional and I don't know the actual operation, but it doesn't feel right. There is also fire fighting. It seems that the biggest problem in the fire scene is the thick smoke. The function of the fire repellent pill (I don't know). Of course, these details do not affect this work.

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Nice quality! There are also surprises in the design of various plots. They will not be boring because of professionalism, nor will they abandon professionalism because of the fun plot. They try to achieve a balance in terms of choices. PS: Here comes the point. It's strange that the author can reply to readers.

The speed of the car is very fast, and the plot arranged by the author in the early stage is a bit tacky, but the three views revealed are very correct. The protagonist is not a coward, he is a pure young man with high spirits and a strong character like Fang Qiu. When you meet a woman, you should also do a directly. Each heroine has a very distinct personality, and my favorite is Lao Fang, hahaha. Invincible novel, Gaga is beautiful, the protagonist Gaga is a real man. Good, good, good, good, top-notch novel

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Ah, very good work! It falls into the category of reading that is very friendly to your health. The protagonist's character is a bit special and endearing. The plot arrangement is also good, the rustling is not boring, and the patriotic plot is natural. The writing is very good. There are not many logic bugs, but they are certainly not absent. Basic errors (wrong sentences), excluding deliberate errors, should be below the average level. At present, the shortcoming is probably that there are few daily updates (the pain of keeping books). I have joined the "Update" group. The author is working hard to write more while ensuring his health! Also, after the identity and characteristics of the protagonist Hongke were reflected in the previous part, the subsequent role suddenly felt useless [laughing and crying] Is it a review issue or did the author forget it? @Bottle Do you still want it?

Personally I think it looks great, five stars for encouragement. There are supernatural powers, but not many. It's fast, but it won't tip over. Harem, but not without brains. The three views are established accurately, and the writing style is slightly humorous. I have read them all and am waiting for further updates. Personal recommendation is four stars.

The content is relatively complicated, but unlike some other entertainment books, which are very blind, the harem is not uncommon, and the emotional development line is not poisonous. I have read more than 100 chapters so far and feel pretty good. Come on, author! [Send heart][Send heart]

Awesome, good, good, good look