The Transmigrated Teacher Caught the General’s Eye, and He Wants Her

Let's warm things up for ourselves. Are there any friends who have strayed in? Come and leave a paw print~

It's great~ The novel is now in a leisurely style. Master Yun has a loving character, that is funny and cute from time to time and gentle as a spring breeze, and then the general feels a bit naive but still stable. There are no bad villagers, they are all simple and enthusiastic, and the story line is really good. I really like this. [Laughing out loud]

The content is very interesting, the characters have their own characteristics, and there is a transitional stage from farming to cultivating immortality that is not abrupt at all. I really like it. That's right, it would be great if I could be more rigorous when writing. Because there are so many typos and omissions, even the character names are frequently wrong. The most obvious and most common ones are "Si" looking north and "Guan" looking north. The finale was very sudden, and it felt like it ended with a lot left unfinished. For example, what is the ending of the big villain? What happened to the two protagonists in the end? Can they be together smoothly? What's going on with Bai Langxing and the Boundary Ark? Did Bai Langxing and the master get together later? There are also junior brothers and sisters who stayed in the small world, and members of the Yue clan. If the drama is going to be supplemented in the future, can you also give the minor characters a clear ending? The ending is rushed and leaves many holes unfilled.

It feels like a very comfortable life. Yun Shu has a good personality and is very cute when she occasionally gets nervous. Feng Qi also likes it when he faces his own heart. At present, it seems that there should be a deputy CP. I look forward to the next plot [Sending Hearts]

"Fun" is my overall feeling about this novel. Whether it is in the small theater where "the author has something to say" or some of the descriptions and dialogues in the text, it is very interesting, especially the way the protagonists meet is very novel. The biggest drawback is that it's not finished

Super Invincible Thunderbolt looks great!

It was quite interesting, but the ending was a little rushed. They should have gone to the world of cultivation, killed everyone, and then broken through space and returned to the Wei Kingdom to rescue Xiao Tiandao and reunite with their brothers. Personally, I felt it was better to write this.

Very good. Can the author change the cover? This seems to be Fang Chengyi from Ni Shuihan (please give me some advice, don't say I'm looking for trouble)

It's so sweet to me. Woohoo. Sisters who like sweet cookies, don't miss this book! I highly recommend this book if you are in a bad mood or bored! The emotional line is very natural and super heartwarming😢The writing and plot are both good! None of the protagonists are weak, and they both grow up. I'm both happy and sad to see it end. These two guys didn't get to the home plate when they finished. I thought they had to wait until the home plate to finish.

This chapter is so captivating that I can't help but praise it! Good writing has its own magic power, bringing back memories of childhood. The figures playing wildly in the fields, the smoke from the village, and the crowing of cocks in the morning all appear before our eyes. It also reminds us of the Chinese textbooks of our childhood. The words are also so vivid and lifelike, full of simplicity and warmth.