Transmigrating Through the Stars: Once the Arrow Is Loosed, There's No Turning Back

The writing is good, but I feel like it could be better Because the author may not know how to make the heroine stand out more Therefore, many of the difficulties set for the heroine can be imagined by everyone, at least the readers can imagine how to solve them. But other people inside just can't figure out how to solve it, so as to highlight the heroine's ability I personally feel that this still needs to be improved. At least it should be so that readers can't figure out how to solve it or can't figure out how to solve it, and there is no need to highlight the heroine in a way that others can't think of.

The heroine is like others who works hard but is really broken inside. It is quite interesting. The heroine is an A-level all-round soldier at the beginning. The heroine is a kind of balanced development. She soon enters the military academy. The heroine later participated in the military academy team competition. I feel that the rhythm is okay. The character of the heroine is very well portrayed and very likable. The plot is relatively simple at the moment. There is no ridicule. I have to say that she does not have the kind of exciting fighting descriptions. It is a book that can be read in the wilderness. [Admiration] I hope the author will write better and better.

Not bad, the whole story chain is quite complete. The heroine is always optimistic and never gives up. She reaches the strongest position step by step and lives the life she wants. I just don't know what happened to Tang Luo after he was taken back. The love between a pair of supporting characters is quite disgusting. Unfortunately, they died later. I will never be able to understand the feeling of falling in love with the daughter of my enemy. Haha, their parents will jump out of the grave and strangle their unfilial son to death. Fortunately, everyone else is living well and living a happy life.

It was quite satisfying after reading it, the writing is relatively smooth, the heroine has no CP, and there are no major poisonous points. More conventional interstellar settings, time travel, military academy, league, internal fighting, Zerg... The heroine is a genius and basically invincible to her peers. He has a humorous personality and high emotional intelligence. Generally speaking, there is nothing particularly frustrating, except that there was a league match where the heroine defeated the strongest player in the Central Military Academy, but she was careless and was caught by him. This plot was a bit disgusting. There are still quite a lot of plots about this person. I don't know if it's because I wanted to write him as the male protagonist, but there is basically no intersection between them later. There are also no female characters of the same age to compete with the heroine in the later stage. There are some in the early and middle stages, but most of them still play supporting roles. It's probably due to the natural opposition of identities. I didn't like the ending a bit but I can accept it. After all, we are all part of nature and everyone has the right to live. In the end, humans and bugs coexist peacefully, and the heroine likes to be the queen mother of bugs.

It's so good to watch. This is my favorite Star Wars novel with a female protagonist after going to school! ! ! ! I love it so much! ! ! ! There are too few authors like this, not many who write wonderfully [crying]

The author's writing style is really good, and the entire background setting is very real and huge. It's a pity that the plot progress is too slow, and the main plot of the heroine being "Dawn" is quite cliché. The most outrageous thing is that the heroine did not have any power and did not show any strength until the last few dozen chapters. She relied entirely on Carter. Carter not only put down the rebels but also found all the evidence in the heroine's house. I even doubt that the so-called light in the prophecy is Carter [Thinking] But it is undeniable that the whole novel is very smooth. Very few female interstellar novels can write such a clear and comprehensive interstellar background. The description of the heroine's various competitions in the academy in the early stage is also very enjoyable. The character setting of the heroine is very interesting. She is a middle schooler and kind, funny and has a strong sense of responsibility. The novel is interesting.

The story is well written, quite interesting, and doesn't have any major flaws. But the writing style is really average. I have read too many good articles recently, and the comparison is a bit harsh. I will keep it on the bookshelf for now, and I may dig it out and read it later when I am short of literature. Younger readers can feel free to dive in, and even those with a naughty appetite can read it even if there is nothing interesting to read.

It's good-looking (♥∀♥), and the heroine has quite a personality. Even with her name, she always thinks of her as a man [face covering]

Personally, I like to watch this kind of relatively plain stuff that gets better through personal efforts. I forgot to encourage the author, the writing is so good that it makes people want to read it and keep reading it.

It's good-looking. It's my favorite interstellar novel, especially the military academy league. I like the content about the military academy the most in the early stage, but then the strength suddenly becomes invincible. Others only have two or three S. The heroine, as a SS, has to hide her strength for the sake of her parents and join the army. I looked for clues, but in the end it was a direct and violent push, and in the end the heroine mediated the high-level Zerg and the human race to shake hands and make peace. It was still good. At least I didn't guess who was behind the scenes at first. When I saw him cleaning up the moths in his house, I thought he was good. Can be brushed again