Arknights: I Am the Great Horde's Young God

This fanfic is really good, and it is one of the few in Tomato. His writing style, characterization, etc., I don't need to say much about the advantages in these aspects. You can find them naturally if you read more, so I want to express some of my other opinions here. This book has a high degree of restoration of the characters in the original work. The little rabbit, kitten, and white rabbit all have the feel of the original work. Some of the private settings are not a big problem, but I want to say that this book is too unfair to Kelsey. Author, why do you want to focus all those scenes on her? Kelsey is not such a character. The author is a chef, which can be basically seen. I also know that most of you chefs dislike Kelsey. I don't want to say anything about this. I can only say that everyone will see it how they see it. The attitude towards a character is not so easy to change, and I don't ask those Kai to be evil. But this book already shows signs of discrediting Kelsey. Let me explain in advance that I am not saying that the author deliberately smeared her, but that the scenes arranged by the author will definitely make many people dislike Kelsey. In this book, Kelsey chooses to use emotion and suffering to bind Kaya in order not to have any ill will towards the world when she becomes a truly mature Sea God in the future. This is understandable in my opinion, because her sincerity will not be devalued because of these. But for Kelsey in this book, I can hardly see her sincerity towards Kaya. She is more of a purposeful use. This is wrong, not Kelsey. Kelsey is actually emotional, but the length of time makes her unable to express herself well, the heavy responsibility makes her unable to care about others, and the tragic years have made her become the "omnipotent" person she is today. "The longer you live, the more stories you have and the more painful your scars are." Every time I think of this, I feel so sad that I can't speak. Is it possible for ordinary people to bear the pain of living alone on this earth for eternity? Most people would go crazy in this situation. But she is so sensible that it makes people feel heartbroken. She is also a human being, so why won't she get hurt? It's just that she understands that there is no point in showing vulnerability here. She must maintain the image of Lord Kelsey who is "all-knowing and all-powerful". Kelsey in the original work, I have no way of knowing how she survived these hardships, but I know that she was tired, really tired, and even wanted to give up. Everything she did was no longer for responsibility. She would not behave like in this book. In her heart, those doctors Amiya and the others are far above their responsibilities. The real her would not use these righteous reasons to force Kaya to do anything, let alone use the excuse of "for this land" to hypnotize herself, self-righteously standing on a safe moral high ground. She is a lone pioneer. "How lonely is your glory?" She doesn't need to flaunt anything, she doesn't need to defend anything, she just protects us as we move forward alone. Author, you can't treat her like this just for the plot. At least, no [Doctor] is qualified to slander her brilliance.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system and many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

The update speed makes me want to advise you to take a rest. The writing is very good (no matter what aspect it is). By the way, don't squeeze out all the inspiration in Chapter 14. Pay more attention to rest (I don't care about you, huh, I'm just fishing for sustainability) [scroll] [scroll] [scroll]

Well, this is a really good book that I read about Arknights. I also like the plot. Personally, when I read Arknights novels, I don't really like the female characters who all have a crush on the male protagonist. Although this one is also a female, this is one of the few books that I seriously follow. I hope the author will not stop updating.

The author's update speed is faster than other authors, and Kaya is also very cute!

I'm writing a review again. Overall, the book is pretty good. The plot and writing are the worst among Ark's second-generation novels, ranking T1. Considering the uneven quality of Ark's novels, there's no chance it can reach T0. Kaya's image is very plump, and she wants to be held in her arms and loved. Zhou's description of suffering is also adequate, capturing the essence of tearing beautiful things into pieces and contrasting to highlight suffering. But there are still some problems exposed: 1. It can be seen that the author wants to write original supporting characters with fuller images and enrich the plot, but it seems that he is a little unable to grasp it. To be honest, some of the dialogues are a bit awkward. Now it's okay to follow the original plot, but later on it will be very good to follow the Agor plot and add new characters. 2. The update is unstable. This update will be interrupted every week. I still like your previous appearance of the humanoid Haiji Jiji. Please restore it.

This is the best book I've read on Arknights

Five stars! Absolutely five stars! There are seven or eight updates a day, which is the most on my bookshelf. Although there are some typos sometimes, they are harmless. Author! I love you! !

So far, it seems to be a pretty good Ark fanfic. Tomato can also be ranked in the top few. All aspects are well connected. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Come on, author! (If you are a little selfish, why don't you let Lapu show up? I feel like she should get along well with the protagonist and Didi)

This is a rare and complete fanfic, but I didn't feel very comfortable watching the plot. After all, I felt there were too many regrets, and the protagonist suffered too many injuries. How could you let the little angel get hurt?