I Slacked Off Too Hard, So My Sect Sold Me Off to Marry the Empress

The author's daily writing is really wonderful and so sweet. I feel that the following outline can focus on the daily development between the two, focusing on the daily flirting of the male and female protagonists, and then writing from the side that the female protagonist is as domineering and arrogant as the female emperor in addition to the male protagonist; when the male protagonist encounters danger, he uses absolute strength and power to protect the female protagonist and the people around him, letting the world know the strength of the male protagonist, and setting off the development of the storyline. Of course, this is just my own idea. As your reader, I am looking forward to your future updates, come on! !

The book is overall good, but there are a few uncomfortable points that I couldn't hold back. The author just had fun reading it. 1. The progress of the male and female protagonists is somewhat fast. If there are any foreshadowings in the future, such as knowing it in advance, it is best to be early, otherwise it will be a bit uncomfortable to watch it with this in mind. 2. Having everything fragrant will only harm you [face covering], especially fragrant cheeks! ! ! ! I haven't seen this description in many novels, and it appears frequently. It's a fish that moves its gills back and forth. Even if you say it's a cute little cheek, the heroine's gills are so cute. She touched the hair on the side of the male protagonist's cheek and poked the male protagonist's gill, crooked sun. . . It looks so uncomfortable I moved away, my cheeks stopped moving, and the more I looked at it, the more uncomfortable I became.

How can I put it this way? It's a sweet love story about love at first sight, and it's over the top. It can also be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into setting up the male and female protagonists, but the description is a bit thin, and the characters affected by the character's background are not written out. It might be better if there are more stories about the male and female protagonists before they met (it is recommended to make a sequel)

It's pretty good. I really love the character of the eldest princess. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is really great. It's a book worth reading.

This book tells the truth, and it is really not too much to give it a strong recommendation of 5 stars. To summarize 3 points: 1 is very sweet 2. The script arrangement is very encouraging. 3. The author's literary talent is indeed very good It's really great. The interaction between the eldest princess and Du Heng is very well written in every paragraph. It's not cheesy and sweet, but really vivid and vivid in the alternation of offense and defense. It makes people feel that this is how love should be. And it is also very perfect in terms of emotional progression, step by step. The literary style used in the book is also very rich. I really like it. I look forward to the serialization and will follow it until the end [Love]

If nothing else, the author's writing style is the ceiling I've seen in Tomato so far. The plot so far doesn't have any interesting points. I don't know if it's because I'm a sister-controller, but the characters are very comfortable to watch. Come on, author, writing is more valuable than more. I won't rush for updates here. I hope that the author's intentions can be seen in every chapter. 9.2 Is by no means the best evaluation for this book. Worth a higher score~ Qingpingle·Painting Storyteller (written to the author using the author's technique) The wind and clouds are rising, and the three realms are awakened. How many guests have been stirred up, it should be sorted out next time. How many more battles between immortals and demons will there be? How can Qiancai match Jia Shu? Laughing at each other thousands of times, I came to the house to listen to books when I was drunk. (The writing is limited, just spray lightly)

Say it first The writing is very good, and I can see that the author has a literary background. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet. The heroine's shyness is perfectly expressed. The description of the scene and the details such as clothes are very good. The two of them are good actors, they like to role-play and engage in taboo scenes. Love very much Besides, I don't feel like I can do it well. This book is labeled as a sister-brother relationship, but the female protagonist is arrogant and arrogant, and the main character is a good-looking and fun-loving character with high attack and low defense (of course I also like it). But the key point is that I think the identity of "sister" that is very important should not only have the characteristic of high attack. The inclusive attributes and mature charm of older sisters are not available in this article. The older sister here is the older lady's older sister. On the contrary, the male protagonist has always been the tolerant one and dotes on the female protagonist.

So far it's pretty good and quite sweet. It's not like those messy articles where the heroine starts killing the hero at every turn. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's quite sweet. The shortcoming is that the author is too short and not enough to read. Short, too short [cry][cry][cry]

The writing is very good, um, the ideas are clear, the structure is complete, and the language expression is very good. The only drawback is that the update is too slow.