The Little Witch Has Run Off with the Saintess Again

When I first read it, I was very surprised. I thought this novel was very good. Why are so few people reading it? After watching it for a while, I found that the switching of perspectives between the two heroines is indeed novel, but it is too frequent. The story here is not finished before cutting to the other side, giving people a feeling of neither going up nor down. There is no need to change the perspective from one chapter to the next. It is very uncomfortable to watch such an abrupt end. But I have to say that it is indeed a good novel, but I don't know why so few people have read it.

Very good, very exciting. This is the first time I have seen the two heroines in Lily's novel. The growth plot lines of the two heroines are so clearly separated. I feel like this title is very novel. It allows people to better compare the growth experiences of the two heroines. It's just that the description of the battle feels a little loose. From the growth of the two heroines to meeting each other, and then slowly falling in love with each other, combined with the comparison of the growth experience of the little witch, I am really curious now. At the end, if Tiandao finds out that the little cabbage he has blessed and cultivated himself has been taken over by the person he tried every means to kill, what kind of plot will develop [laughing]

It's so beautiful. I finished it in one day. It's not enough at all. It's really, really good-looking. The two heroines are both powerful. They have status, status and appearance. The two heroines have very interesting personalities. It's really good-looking. The recommendation index is 99+ stars.

Now that I have read the previous part, let me talk about my impressions. Failure to do a good job in dividing the plot resulted in a serious separation of perceptions, and the character creation in the early stage was blunt or even not created at all. The worldview is complete but the method of explaining it is not very good. It is like a narration that talks a lot. The explanation is very clear but it is not suitable for novels. For improvement, you can refer to the worldview in Lord of Mysteries. Most of the worldview information comes from other people's mouths, the protagonist's reasoning, or letters and diaries. Narration-style explanations will greatly reduce the immersion. There are also advantages. The writing is concise and capable, which is my favorite style. In short, there are many problems in the first part, and the score of more than 8 points is expected. The motivation for reading comes from the expectation of the meeting between the two protagonists, and I hope that the subsequent story can cover up the shortcomings of the previous part.

The plot is very interesting and the content is very novel, but I don't know if it's because I've watched too many climax plots. After three-quarters of it, I still feel like I don't have the desire to continue watching. So I quit now. Come on, author [like][like]!

It's super good-looking, and I really admire the author's great conception. I came to read this book after reading "Senior Sister Who Went Through Books to Become a Villain, How the Heroine Turned Dark First". I liked both books very much. I hope the author can write more books. I can't get enough of it! ! ! ! ! ! ! From now on, the author is my goddess! ! ! ! ! !

I think it's very beautiful. Recommended recommended recommended! ! ! ! ! It's really super pretty [lick the screen][lick the screen]

It looks good and I like it. I hope it will continue to be sweet!

It's beautiful, and the two heroines are sober. It's not the kind of mindless cool article. You are very strong and you have made it this far through your own efforts. The characters in it are also very powerful, and the names are nice.

I came to read this book after reading Senior Sister. It can be considered an early book by the author. The writing is relatively young, and the dialogue and plot are a bit vague and inconsistent, but overall it is a good quality novel.