I Transmigrated Into a Book as the Villainous Senior Sister, So Why Did the Heroine Turn Dark First?

I give it 5 points, it is really beautiful. I have read many novels about two girls, but this is the first time I have seen this one. When I saw Shura Blood, I thought it was very handsome. In the future, I think it is better not to delete Shura Blood. I feel that Shura Blood adds a charm to the heroine, which makes me feel The heroine is even more handsome. If she really becomes a Shura tribe and becomes a demon in the future, there will definitely be swords, but I feel that it is better to have a knife. Blind sweetness will only make people lose interest. And the world view of the Shura tribe will not be perfect without swords. I really want to see some swords about the Shura tribe in the middle.

It's pretty good. I want to see the protagonist being posted [smile][smile][smile]

The writing is very good, I need to add some scale and color [smile] Very good looking. Need some color.

This novel really made me unable to put it down! The author's writing is very smooth and the storyline is exciting. The characters are vivid, especially the protagonist's personality and behavior, which I praised repeatedly. I loved this book and gave it five stars.

The author has written so much, but it is still very interesting. But the author must not use the knife. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's good-looking, indeed good-looking, but I feel that Su Yunyao has no charm at all, her presence is low, and she doesn't feel like she is the heroine at all. Only his love rivals were increasing all the time. On the other hand, Mu Wuyi is infinitely charming and has no sense of crisis at all. Reborn feels a little over-nerfed. With her talent as the original heroine, coupled with her high level of understanding and cultivation speed before her rebirth, she should be the fastest one. The further you go, the weaker his talent becomes. Qin Wuyi, who was the same age as her, caught up with her. It is too weak for the Reborn. The reborn should be further away from the others as they get further back. Because she had already reached a high level in her previous life. Your understanding of the following realm is stronger than others. In addition, he has good talent. He should be the one with the fastest cultivation speed. None of the advantages of rebirth are reflected. It would be better not to be born again. This is more reasonable.

I have read several novels about two female protagonists cultivating immortals and concluded that this type of subject matter is quite difficult to write. It is difficult to balance the traditional plot of cultivating immortals with the emotional line. Either the emphasis is on cultivating immortals and weakening the emotional part, or the emotional part is all about cultivating immortals and is just a background setting. To be honest, this film should be biased towards the former. It is a bit difficult to advance the plot in a long narrative style. Fortunately, after more than 80 chapters, the relationship between the two heroines has become clearer and more special. The plot has also gradually gotten better, and there are many more charming female characters. This is more exciting. I hope there will be more interactive plots between the two heroines.

After listening to it, Shura Blood is very interesting, and I look forward to the day when I will become the Black Demon Lord in the future. Why is the rating not high? Support the author. Faster and faster, not enough to watch👀

So cute I watched half of it a long time ago and finished it in just two days. Among all the double heroines I have watched, Lily's emotional scenes are among the best. The plot logic is also relatively complete, and the interactions are also very cute. The author is very good at writing step-by-step, and does not say that he only focuses on plot development and forgets about emotional development. The only fly in the ointment is that sometimes women are written from a male perspective. For example, when the heroine comes to another sect, the male disciples try their best to show off their handsomeness, and the female disciples also want to compete to see who is more beautiful. In fact, it's quite illogical. In reality, when most girls see beautiful girls, they admire them instead of competing to see who is more beautiful. There are also some questions about big breasts and small breasts, but it is actually not necessary? But because other aspects are very to my liking, I gave it 5 stars. I hope to keep up the good work! I look forward to better works.

Very good, very good. I came from Little Witch and Little Saint. I really like this author's story about two female protagonists cultivating immortality. Come on.