The Nascent Soul Senior Sister Is Wrapped Around the Little Foundation-Building White Lotus’s Finger

I read it for nearly 30 minutes. Overall, it's not too bad. What's a bit sad is that the author could have made the title more interesting. Also, there are two female protagonists here. I hope the author can speed up the relationship line a little bit [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Author, please don't change this fine tradition. I like Zhenqi who has a good routine and works hard to make progress [shy]. You write and write to Zhenqi and you are depraved. My little heart can't bear it [Petrochemical]

This is a novel that does not "live up to its name". Compared with the content, the title is the thing I am most dissatisfied with, but even so, I hope to complete it. And I'm looking forward to waiting for more people's comments, hoping that someone can see some of the small structures I designed, and I'm also eager to be recognized. But ignore those, what I want most is to be loyal to my heart. If you can, please take it seriously.

Brother, please write another chapter. One chapter, one chapter is fine. Please, I won't run away. Brother, I'm really itchy. Please, I'm obedient. I'll never make trouble again. Please, brother, write another chapter. I'm so itchy now. Please, brother, just write it last. Just once, brother, I'll give you whatever you want. Just write a little more. I feel like there are ants crawling in my body now. It's so itchy. Brother, please write more. The last time, I swear, is really the last time. (It's great to use a trumpet to generate electricity so that friends can't see it😇)

I haven't finished reading it yet. I want to ask. It's over 200,000 words now. Has Zhen Qi transformed into a god? If so, can you tell me which chapter it is? If you haven't transformed into a god yet, wouldn't that mean tricking people into killing them?

This book is a product of interest, and its writing style and interest are both excellent. Let me float up in the book drought of Tomato

At the end of the second volume, I feel that the author's pace is a bit slow, and the explosive points are not too explosive, but I like the style more, and there are more inner dramas. The author can think about how to control the rhythm better, come on💪There is still room for improvement [laughter]

The third volume is in progress. Maybe I still have some expectations for this relationship. After all, after 200 chapters, there must be some progress. But the progress is not very encouraging. In the early days, the mountain gate was busy and sparsely populated, and the senior sister was the head of the family, practicing, cooking, and teaching in an ordinary way. It was leisurely but did not make me feel bored. There is no need to use my brain at this stage, just follow the rhythm of the words. I am happy not to think about it. Then I progressed to the Nascent Soul realm, and I suddenly realized that after more than 100 chapters, the world seemed to be getting bigger and there were more and more characters. However, there was no progress in the matter of the senior sister and the junior sister. Even the number of appearances of the junior sister was so few that the system could intervene. So I started to get impatient and took another look at the title. The only thing I remembered about my junior sister was the New Year's Eve fireworks. There are obviously a lot of interactions, but there is always a template, appropriate physical contact, and inextricable restraint. Then my goal is clear, nothing matters, who you are, a new role, is not important, who you are, a new role, is not important either. I have no intention of exploring the background, and my eyes can't accommodate the huge world. Ah, when will we be able to be in the same frame and make some progress? So I waited, that confession... How should I put it, it was quite solemn and quite sudden, so sudden that I didn't even understand why I liked it. To be honest, I thought it would be a confession round, but I didn't expect it to be a confession round. Maybe it was the price of my impatience in the middle. I didn't feel the sense of security brought by the realization of this relationship. Instead, I felt that maybe I had wrong expectations. I can't tell whether it's right for the senior sister to be the absolute C-position, but to weaken the junior sister's appearance is definitely not worthy of the title. Having said that, I think this book is quite rare on Tomato. The writing is good but it doesn't match the title and my expectations...

The article is very delicately written, and the author has great imagination. It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. But when reading, you need to calm down and read. The author likes to write some other narratives while writing about the main business. It is better to start explaining other things suddenly when he is fighting. The thinking is very jumpy, and readers who are not used to it may not be able to read it.

It took me a long time to finish reading it. I only read it at first because the title attracted me. But after reading it for a while, I realized that I shouldn't read this novel impetuously. I should wait until my mind calms down to start reading it. This novel has a strong sense of plainness, like telling a story, like a breeze blowing by. I really like this style. Although most of the perspectives follow the protagonist, I feel it is more like a group drama. It seems that everyone has a point of view that I can agree with. Whether it is the strong, the weak, the immortal, or the mortal, everyone is indispensable, and finally forms the Sifang Realm. As for Zhenqi, she will be a strong part of my memory of the novel, and she has left a deeper impression on me than this novel. As the protagonist of this book, she is as upright, decisive, and sharp as a sword. Zhenqi has an extremely firm heart, and everyone can see hope. Finally, I am very grateful to the author for his novels that bring me happiness. (Complaint: I saw so few people) Needless to say, I feel that I can still keep up with the author's airwaves. When I mentioned that Zhenqi's cultivation was growing too fast very early on, I could probably guess that Tiandao would be filled with the protagonist, and then the plot was more or less part of it. I like to analyze the plot and ending based on the foreshadowing laid by the author. I saw that their ratings mentioned the Riddler's problem, but I don't think it is a problem. This novel has been expressing a situation from the beginning: the extremely determined Shinki will cut off all schemes and evil with just a swing of his sword. Therefore, whether the riddle is a riddle or not does not have much impact on the perception. In front of the absolute road, all the sideways are not worth mentioning.

I think this book is really good. The character creation of the protagonist Zhen Qi is very consistent with my definition of "righteousness". The author's writing style is also very good. In my opinion, this book has the potential of at least 8.5 Points (this is my opinion, maybe others may not like it?). I really like it. I hope the author will not stop updating or unfinish it. Come on! [Praise]