Dream of the Red Chamber: A Maid’s Schemes

To be honest, the writing style is really good. It has the feeling of Red Mansion, but it is not complicated and lengthy. I was only halfway through watching it, and I was confused by the heroine's sudden emotional line. What's going on? ? ? Especially after I recovered from my illness, I went to the [male protagonist]'s house and looked at [the male protagonist] and "I couldn't help but make my eyes turn red." I only watched half of it and wasn't sure if it was true. Not sisters! Why are you suddenly in love? Oh my god! ! I'm really confused! Before time travel➕After time travel, we must be in our 30s. You and a teenage boy (from a modern perspective) looked at each other and smiled, and you suddenly fell in love so much that you paid for it out of your own pocket. You really made me cry to death. You've only met a few times, and you're telling me that love comes so fast, like a tornado? ? ? ! ! (I know some people will say: This is a red mansion background, and most teenagers fall in love with each other. Why do they like each other? Why are you so nosy? If you don't like it, just leave! I want to say: I can accept seeing each other as teenagers and getting married, and I can also accept liking each other. But at least your emotional line should be more natural! ! ! In the first few chapters, I talked about being self-reliant, self-sufficient, and grooming myself to be a nanny. Then I immediately blushed, my heart skipped a beat, and I smiled shyly, "Hey, I seem to have singled out [smile]"? ? ! When I look at these pictures, I always feel that the heroine is like a blood package for the hero. As for the heroine in the front, I am ready for the heroine to become more and more awesome. There's a bit of um in the back... It's hard to comment, I want to give men tools, I want to become a little wife) I have never written such a long review before, mainly because the previous one was really good. Suddenly, it flashed into my mind. Now it is crying and begging me not to read it, for fear of being in a big trap later [rolls eyes] I made a mistake in grading. I'll come back and correct it.

It's so good. There are too few articles about Chuan Red Mansions that I can read carefully. It would be great if the author wrote more. It would be great if he wrote a second part about married life and Daiyu [Thoughts]

The story is written very smoothly, and I read it in one sitting. It felt very satisfying. I like this kind of red mansion story where Sister Lin has a good ending, but why does she have to hide her identity for Xue Yan? Wouldn't it be nice to be self-sufficient and redeem yourself and find a good home?

Among all the red houses, it is quite good. It is very in line with the sense of the times. It is about romance but is sensible and disciplined. Unlike others, it is talking about girls who are not allowed to sit at the table when they are seven years old, and at the same time they are giving and receiving in private. And the whole article is very coherent. It is one of the few novels that I can finish.

Very well written! Having brains does not mean being blindly reckless based on knowing the plot. Without Bailian or the heart of a holy mother, you must have a clear conscience within your ability. If others are good to me, I will be good to others! A more real human heart. It may not be comparable to other novels, but among Red Mansions fanfics, it's pretty good.

I have read it all, and I have to say that it is very well written, the characters are deeply portrayed, and the character is nice and generous. I really like what I say and do. The ending of "The Butterfly Effect" is very good, but I didn't write the endings of the other Twelve Beauties. It would be nice to explain them.

The front part is good, but the emotional scenes are not good to watch, and the behavior of the male and female protagonists before they get together is a bit out of character. Moreover, Daiyu and the others didn't explain the ending clearly. However, the plot is compact and not procrastinating. Except for the emotional scenes, it is written delicately and smoothly, making people want to keep watching. Like

It's really great and very clever, but the status given in the extra chapter is a bit high. It's not like a little person's counterattack, but the reason why the ugly duckling became the white swan is because the ugly duckling was originally the white swan. This can also be said to be a failure, but some readers will like it, so you can refer to it yourself

It's not a bad idea to stay up late and watch [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]. The plot of the whole text is compact and I held my breath several times when Xue Yan cursed people. [Laughing and crying] The heroine is sober and works hard. Whether it is embroidery or cooking, she has gained proficiency through a little hard work and is not a so-called gold finger. I am very proud of this. The time-travel companion Mrs. Xing's efforts to change the fate of those close to her are not the traditional business of having nothing to do with herself, hanging high and watching your tall building collapse. The characters are vivid. Worth watching.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is also good, it is worth reading! Personally, I think it is very good for Xue Yan to marry as the adopted daughter of Mrs. Later, even if the male protagonist is in high school, Mrs. Xing's identity as the adopted daughter is enough.