HP: This Time, I'll Love You, DMHP

The plot is novel, the plot is smooth, and the rhythm is tight. However, I did not give five stars because Severus and Sirius were probably written as a couple. Many readers like to clap, but it depends on the situation. Whether it is from the perspective of the original text or the fan, for Severus, he should like girls. Of course, I am not saying that it is wrong to like boys, but regardless of whether his cp is a boy or a girl, it should not be Sirius. In my opinion, Sirius is the bully, he and Lupin, Harry's father, and little Peter Star bullied Severus when he was a student. To me, the relationship between Severus and Sirius is that of the bullied and the bully. I personally would be very uncomfortable if they were together, regardless of Severus. No matter how Ross is doing now, he can't erase the bullying and hurt caused by Sirius. If the author sees that Severus and Sirius are not together, it will destroy the coded outline, just pretend that he didn't see it, but if the impact is not big, I still hope that Severus' CP will not be Sirius

I feel good about myself, hehe, I hope everyone likes it~

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's super beautiful. As the first person to review this book, I can only say it's very beautiful. This Harry is completely different from the Harry in the original book. The Harry in the original book has messy hair, but this Harry has a buzz cut, and he met Draco at the beginning. The two entered Slytherin together, and Severus and Sirius were in love together. And Ron will not fall in love with Hermione, but will fall in love with Blaise, and Pansy may fall in love with Hermione (probably, not sure) I can only say a few words. Treasure books are really treasures. If you don't read them, you will be at a loss.

Personally speaking, it looks good and the plot is lively and interesting. The daily life of the two little ones is very sweet. Harry (not the original Harry, but he is in his world) is slowly making Draco better, changing his prejudices and becoming strong. [I am a simple fan of movies, the above are all my personal opinions, please read the article for details]

Very good. Really good. The character of the male protagonist and some of the interactions between them. The characters are all very complete. However, I just feel that Astoria's character is not as gentle as in the original book. I feel that it has been changed in this book. It feels weird to see Astoria lose her temper like that. Everything else is okay. Very sweet. Recommend nice. Another one is the pairing of Sirius and Severus. This book is about the two of them liking each other. But I feel that Sirius, as the bully, and Severus, as the bullied person, were not so easy to forgive the pain at that time. The writing here is too easy. Just like this and that, eh, I forgive you. I love it. The wounds of bullying are not so easy to heal. Otherwise, why would Severus hate James Potter so much? But it also feels very sweet. It's just a little evil [thinking]

This book is really great. I just want to ask the author, is this book Hader or Deha?

Dear author, is this book Deha or Harder? If it's Hader, please tell me. I like Deha better, thank you😊

Dear book lovers, don't be blinded by the cover. It's really super, super, super beautiful.

Just summarize. First let me talk about what I like better. First, the emotional line between Draco and Harry was laid out very naturally. Nothing particularly blunt. Moreover, this book is the first book I have read in which Harry is sorted into Slytherin. It is really great. The second is that GGAD, a pair of CPs, are finally in the same frame, and the writing is particularly good. It can be regarded as making up for the regret. Third, well, I would like to thank the author for giving a happy ending to most of the difficult characters in the original work, so that at least they did not become my second time. Ah, at the same time, what is the most important point at the same time? It's because that disgusting thing from Umbridge didn't appear, really. Just this terrible thing, regardless of whether the author's writing is good or not, if this thing appears in a large part of the article, it will really affect my reading experience. Fortunately, there is no Umbridge in this article. Damn it, I am much happier reading without this terrible thing. Then let me talk about my personal suggestions for this book. One point is about the pairing of Professor Snape and Sirius. I personally think that Professor Snape, as the bullied person, may not be easy or possible to forgive Sirius, the bully, given his character. Then there is the author. Since he wrote this pair of CPs, they should have a beginning and an end. However, the author did not explain clearly why they broke up in the first point, and did not explain their follow-up clearly in the second point. So I think this may be one of the failures. Then the second one is about the exchange student who slid over. After explaining clearly what happened to him in the end, the person mentioned later completely disappeared without any clear explanation of his consequences. Oh, finally, here are some blessings from me. First, I hope the author's writing style will get better and better. Second, I hope more people can read this article.

Damn, this is the best book I have ever read (maybe not) but I have to say, thank you for bringing all my favorite characters together! Maybe they will meet in another time and space. I hope my CP can be together forever. I wish all endings can be happy!