The Princess and Her Female Consort: Married First, Love Later

Come on! It's well written, but not very segmented at the beginning.

It can be seen that this is the first time the author has written. The description of appearance and details are less, and the pace is fast. It seems that the author is also quite anxious. I like girls from Suzhou. I, a scumbag, can't refuse a soft and waxy girl who likes me.

This shitty yellow button is so eye-catching [crying][crying]

It's okay. I originally thought the heroine was Li Rou, but it turned out to be Li Yue. If the protagonist is with Li Rou, it should be very sweet. And there is a point that Li Yue kissed a boy. I felt a little uncomfortable. Then I felt that the princess was a bit messy. Originally, she was already married to our protagonist, but she ended up with that scumbag. I think the protagonist's sister is right at all. I didn't feel that they were sweet at all, and the female behind The protagonist is also planning to buy her a parrot to coax Li Yue. I feel that the protagonist is not wrong at all. She is wrong. No matter whether we like our protagonist or not, we have to save some face for our protagonist. After all, the protagonist has married her, but he is still interacting with that scumbag. It is better to let the protagonist and Li Rou be together. After all, Li Rou kind of likes the protagonist. This is the idea I see now. If there is someone I am interested in, I will continue to comment. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

Not bad, I really like it, looking forward to the follow-up

[Like] It's great. It can be called a masterpiece in the world of dual heroines. The storyline is interesting and there are not so many twists and turns. The language of the whole novel is smooth, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it is highly recommended.

The plot is very good

Haha, the story is quite interesting, but it's like a chronicle, and the characters are rather stereotyped. I can add more stories and details in the future, which will make it more vivid and rich. Overall, it's readable, and there's nothing particularly shocking or objectionable about it.

The first two chapters are full of tension, and the last two chapters are HE. There are a lot of surprises that have not been laid out. The subject matter is really good, but it is really a pity that Lu Yong, the biggest foreshadowing, didn't write it! The five-star praise is all because of the two heroines! ! !

It looks good, and I like it. Can the author give it two more chapters? I simply can't see enough, [grievance] [grievance] [grievance]