The Princess and Her Female Consort: Married First, Love Later

Keep it up! It's well written, but the beginning isn't well-organized into paragraphs.

It's clear this is the author's first time writing; there's less detailed description of appearance, and the pacing is fast, suggesting the author was in a hurry. I like girls from Suzhou; this scumbag girl can't resist a soft, gentle girl who likes her.

This shit-yellow button is so eye-catching! 😢😢

It's alright, but I initially thought the female lead was Li Rou, but it turned out to be Li Yue. If the protagonist had ended up with Li Rou, it would have been very sweet. One major issue is that Li Yue kissed a guy; it made me a little uncomfortable. Also, the princess seemed a bit unreasonable. She's already married to our protagonist, yet she's still with that jerk.

It's pretty good, I like it quite a bit, looking forward to the next installment.

👍 Fantastic! A masterpiece among dual-female-lead novels. The plot is interesting, without too much scheming and intrigue. The language is fluent, the writing is smooth and natural. Highly recommended.

The plot is excellent.

Haha, the story is quite interesting, but it's like a diary entry, and the characters are a bit stereotypical. Adding more story and detailed descriptions would make it more vivid and engaging. Overall, it's watchable; there weren't any particularly cheesy or offensive parts.

The beginning was full of suspense, and the happy ending only came in the last two chapters. I haven't addressed many potential pitfalls, but the premise is really good. However, it's a real shame that the biggest foreshadowing, Lu Yong, wasn't developed! Five stars solely because of the two female leads!!!

It's so good, just to my liking! Could the author please write two more chapters? I can't get enough! 🥺🥺🥺