I Transmigrated into Date A Live and Became a New Spirit

I feel that among the dating stories I have read, this one is the last one. It fits the character design and is particularly close to the original work. There is no objection to the protagonist's interludes. It's great. Please give it a boost, the author [please give me more updates] [like this post]

Compared to some fanfics in SF that have a strong romance atmosphere, it can be considered a breath of fresh air. Except for the too many daily parts and the word count, there are no big problems. The character creation is convenient, and the battle scenes are good. The overall sense is pretty good, and there are no poisonous points. As of the latest chapter, there has been no such thing as changing marriages or remarrying, and I hope there won't be any in the future. After that, I spent some time to finish the part I had just brushed off. The relationship between the protagonist and Shido can still be summarized as a "brotherhood". There are not many lily elements. It is a bit far-fetched to say that it is light. At present, it seems that the protagonist has the possibility of moving to a higher level (god) in the future. I look forward to what the author will write next. Yeah, it's not the same, it's good. Oh, by the way, I went to read the comments on the storybook. The author replied that there will be no emotional drama between the protagonist and Shido, so book friends can still read it with confidence [laughing]. Can the book friends who saw this comment help me upvote it [like it], I want more people to see it [send my heart]

It is a novel that Yue Zhanchu feels very familiar with. The stories added by the author outside the main line of the original novel will not appear too abrupt, but instead make the main story line clearer. The story of dating is very long, but fans of dating will always support and accompany you. I hope the author can persevere with quality and quantity. Come on [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The beginning of this book is super good, and the rest is also very good. I like it~

It's the best dating fanfic I've ever read.

It's been a few months since I finished it, so I'll give it five stars when I come back. I have read a lot of fandoms, and it can indeed be said to be the ceiling. Let's not talk about it. There are very few fanfictions that can be completed. This alone deserves a good review. The writing is average to above average, and most of the plot is relatively comfortable. Maybe some of the reasons for quitting were in the early stages. The protagonist's setting was too suppressed and suffered a lot. Then there is the Chinese chapter. To be honest, this long section is somewhat confusing. Although it is said to be a power show, it is a bit delayed and the viewing experience is not good. I am a latecomer and it was difficult to watch this section. It was so tortured to follow the update. . Yuri is pretty good. Finally, it's rare to see a complete emotional line in an online article. Sure enough, it's better to take it slow. . . However, I always feel that I am still a little tied to the original work, but fortunately, I still wrote a lot of my own things. Narcissus, okay, okay, Narcissus Kitchen is really going to explode on the spot. The bond between Red and Blue Muqing in this book is really great. They support each other, are of one mind, understand each other, and are completely tolerant and accepting. This book is really satisfying. (Arctic Circle residents are so unscrupulous) That's right, the pace of the later stages was really too fast. It's probably because the author had difficulty giving birth, so the completion was delayed for several months. But it is still a good work. I praise the author and contribute to the dating circle.

It's a very interesting book. In fact, I really want to read the plot with Shido. I want to see the feeling of being deflated that Shido can't get. The setting is okay, and the plot is not satisfactory. Generally speaking, if you like fighting, you can read it.

It can be said that it is the best-looking of all the battle fanfics I have ever read, bar none. I would like to give you a piece of advice, be sure to stick to the end. It is extremely easy to get lost in the early and middle stages of this novel, but when you keep reading and see that the back is full of knives and pitfalls, you will completely fall in love with it. In particular, it tells the story of Mu Qing's experience when she first came into this world in the first week. Everyone regarded herself as the enemy. The only one who understood her was the collapse when her best friend Kuang San died in front of her. The audience felt depressed and could not calm down for a long time. The only flaw is that there are too many watery plot points in the early and middle stages, especially the Chinese chapter, which does not affect the advancement of the plot at all and is unnecessary. It is recommended to skip the Chinese chapter directly. The climax of the entire novel will be around chapter 800. The prototype of the protagonist should be the collapsed Xi'er. Fans of Xi'er must not miss this novel. Chapter 800 is the peak of this novel. If you just look at the previous plot and then quit, it will be a big loss in life. By the way, the protagonist is two souls with the same memories sharing the same body. Bai Qing is a female spirit who has the memory of a boy, while Hei Qing is a male spirit who has traveled through time and has a female body. This novel is simply a ecstasy for Honkai players. Many settings and plots in it are borrowed from Honkai. Even the protagonist is created based on Seele. A loli and a sickle, and two opposite personalities, huh?

This is the most interesting novel among all the dating novels I have ever read. Judging from the plot, it should be Lily. I originally liked reading about changing marriages, but this is the only one I am interested in. A Lily, I think the author writes it very well.

It's a very good book about dating. Although it's not a masterpiece among the books I've read, it's still a very good read. According to the current trend, one is Qingyuri, Niya, and Miku. As for Kurumi and Wanyuri, it is not obvious. At present, the novel is estimated to be in the middle and late stages, and I look forward to the author's update. And I also like the protagonist template very much (Xierchu is ecstatic). Come on, this is a sickle paired with a lolita. It's awesome~_~