Date A Live: You Want Me as the Protagonist? No Thanks!

This is the real way to redeem elves. Shido's way of redemption always feels too tough, unreal and forced.

It's okay, compared to the battle fan fiction I've read, it's pretty good. Especially the emotional description is very delicate. But the more detailed the description, the more I feel that the love Luo Li gave Yu Kamishiro is a fake with purpose. What I have seen so far is more than 4,000 pages, I hope it will be better in the future. Another thing is that the protagonist is too determined.

I hope book friends can give me a rating. 💕 🤔 There should be no one left.

In my personal opinion, the writing style tends to be stream-of-consciousness and has a certain reading threshold. This type is either particularly appetizing or may be a bit hard to stomach. Sometimes I can read the book in one go without thinking about it. The content is piled up and it feels like the author just typed out whatever came to mind. Sometimes it can be clearly felt that there are some gaps between the paragraphs. To put it more seriously, some paragraphs are not connected to the previous content, which makes the reading feel a bit fragmented. The character creation seems to be in the style of Japanese light novels, with a kind of principled and stubborn personality that is not particularly common but not uncommon in recent years (forgive me for describing it this way, I didn't think of other very appropriate adjectives, it feels like a great teacher). Many things that can be easily solved will choose more complex actions based on their own ideas, and the help they provide is more inclined to comfort their own hearts. The preference for personal character creation style and plot content description varies from person to person. The plot is more daily oriented, with a larger proportion of psychological description, and the plot is not advanced very fast. Except for some brief fighting descriptions in the first few chapters (really?), There are almost no battle rounds. The current conflict is the tension between the protagonist's determination to go home and the accumulation of bonds. Simply put, it is the issue of belonging. If the protagonist wants to go back, he must contact the elves and accumulate strength, but it will also deepen the bond. According to my understanding, the follow-up trend is to keep contacting the elves (I'm quite curious how Wu will contact each other, whether to skip directly or make other arrangements) and then accumulate strength. He accidentally falls down several times in the middle, causing the elves to reverse. After accumulating enough bonds, he hesitates, and finally chooses to stay, or like the previously written extra story, he goes back, but the elves also follow. At present, the image and character of the male protagonist have been described very clearly. After all, a lot of ink has been spent on describing it. Judging from the current description, the male protagonist has a firm idea of ​​going back, so the description of the conflict and why he will change his mind is worth thinking about. I am looking forward to it. Having said so much, it actually doesn't matter. After all, it's just my unilateral output of opinions. I quite like this book and look forward to the follow-up.

The protagonist Luo Li has a relatively distinctive personality, and his interaction with the characters in "The Battle" is also full of fun, adding a lot of fun to the story and allowing readers to feel a relaxed and happy atmosphere during the reading process.

Hmm... How should I put it? I think it's inexplicably good-looking. Maybe it's because I personally like this type of novel, about ordinary daily life...

Very good-looking, but the disadvantage is that the male protagonist is too determined 🤦

It has shortcomings, but it was written by someone seriously, and that's enough.

Let's have a fun ending of "stealing the sky for eternal life, Fang Yuan returns home". For example: After calculating everything, you finally return home and find that countless years have passed, human civilization has ended, and the people and things you care about are buried in the past forever. He must have been in great pain at that time. Let me taste this pain, it must be a very wonderful taste, hehe.

From my heart, if you can accept the fatal dose, it's still pretty good.