I Only Wanted to Stack Passives, but I Was Forced to Beat Up an Admiral

It's very immature. I can really feel what you want to write, but your writing style is your shortcoming. For example, there is little foreshadowing in scenes similar to separation, and there is less memory when the character dies. For example, the paragraph written when Anna died at the beginning was too straightforward. You want to write too much and you don't pay attention to the details. This is a novice's fault, which will lead to future problems. There is no inspiration on the surface, which is also an advantage. Generally, old authors just write for the sake of writing novels, but newcomers are different. They really think about it and write what comes to mind. For example, an article based on an essay outline is not directly written with feelings. It can only be said that it is very simple to have an innocent heart, but very few are preserved. How to say that? Everyone has it, a sage should not lose his ears. Author, I am paying attention to you. If you can keep your innocent heart, I will be your loyal fan. If you lose it by then, I will not hesitate to cancel it. Come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

I have read a few chapters and found the writing to be very good and the content to be good. However, the pirate world still has devil fruit abilities, so the author can design a devil fruit for the protagonist that matches his own abilities. For example, the Momo fruit can directly improve the protagonist's physical fitness, and vampire fruits are also available.

It's one of the better pirate fanfics I've ever read.

Overall, I quite liked this book (five stars first), but it was a bit uncomfortable to read about the protagonist's progress in strength. It's good that the protagonist keeps growing, but once he encounters a well-known opponent, he will be forced to fight 50-50, and in most cases he will be seriously injured, putting him at a disadvantage. This actually gives me a sense of powerlessness that even if the protagonist cheats and works very hard, he cannot fight or surpass other strong players, so it feels a bit uncomfortable. I know this is written to be logical (after all, they are both geniuses in the world and have been practicing longer than the protagonist), and also to ensure that the combat power does not collapse, but it really does not give readers much sense of satisfaction, and it is difficult to have expectations for the battle. (Whenever there is a crisis battle, I am afraid that the protagonist will not be able to defeat him [laughs awkwardly]) I heard someone say before that good novels are more about sensory enjoyment than rigorous logic. Of course, I am not sure whether this theory is reasonable, so I just casually commented and provided the author with other ideas.

I gave it five stars so that everyone can see it, by the way, to avoid lightning, pure plot, no changes, except for the ending, which is pretentious, the rest is all the original plot. After a third of it, I have basically seen the end. Oden becomes a friend, Hiyori becomes an adopted daughter, Blackbeard continues to board the ship, Bundy continues to be unlucky, Roger continues to die, and suddenly I wonder, why do I want to read the novel, why don't I continue to watch the original anime,

It's perfect, beautiful, and in my 10 years of reading, it's in the top 5 of my fanfics! In no particular order, I read 300,000 words in one go. It feels so good and I'm keeping it.

The writing is very clear, the logic is very clear, not brainless, and the sense of character substitution is also very strong. It is concise and easy to understand, with rich plot levels. It is also a very good book, but the updates are too slow, and the production team don't dare to take such a rest.

It's really good. It's definitely more than 6.6 Points and 8.8 Should be the original score. There are basically no poison points. The early setting of the Heart Steel equipment at the beginning is very interesting, but later I seem to have forgotten that I mentioned 6 equipment slots before. Also, if the setting of deliberate punching is not good and can't be penetrated, it's not really hurt.

Chapter 154 comes with all the equipment, Blood Hand, Ice Fist, one glove in each hand, Thousand Changer, Force of Nature, Anti-Armor, all embodied and worn on the body, plus Heart Steel, there is no Jujiu and Ruin. The explanation given is that it is a weapon, he uses fists, and it is inappropriate to use weapons.

Not bad, a level above most other pirate stories! ! !