I Only Wanted to Stack Passives, but I Was Forced to Beat Up an Admiral
只想叠被动的我被迫揍了大将
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- Completed
- Length
- 924k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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Which Fanfic Is the Most Stunning? I Want One That Sticks With Me After I Finish It
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As long as it's good.
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It's quite immature. I can genuinely feel what you want to write, but your writing style is a weakness. For example, there's a lack of foreshadowing in scenes of separation, and fewer memorable moments when characters die. The passage about Anna's death at the beginning was too straightforward. Trying to write too much leads to overlooking details, a common mistake for beginners.
I've read a few chapters, and it's very well written with good content. However, the One Piece world still has Devil Fruit abilities, so the author could design a Devil Fruit that suits the protagonist's abilities, such as the Momo-Momo Fruit, which could directly enhance the protagonist's physical attributes, or the Vampire Fruit.
This is one of the better One Piece fanfictions I've ever read.
Overall, I quite liked this book (giving it five stars for now), but the protagonist's progress in strength felt a bit unsatisfying. While his continuous growth is commendable, whenever he encounters a renowned opponent, he almost always manages a stalemate, often ending up severely injured and at a disadvantage.
I'm giving it five stars so everyone can see it, and also to warn others. It's purely based on the story, with no changes. Except for the ending, which is a bit pretentious, the rest is entirely the original plot. I've read about a third of it, which is pretty much the end.
Perfect, great read, in my 10+ years of reading experience, this is in the top 5 of fanfiction! (In no particular order) I finished all 300,000 words in one go, so satisfying, I'm keeping it in my reading list.
It's written very clearly, with a logical flow, avoiding mindless plot twists, and the characters are very immersive. Concise and easy to understand, with a rich and layered storyline, it's a very good book. The only downside is the slow update speed; even the donkeys in the production team wouldn't dare take a break like that.
It's really good, definitely more than 6.6, 8.8 Should be the original score. There are basically no flaws. The early game setup and the Heart Steel equipment setup at the start are very interesting, but later on it seems like they forgot that they mentioned there are 6 equipment slots. Also, the Intentional Punch setup is not good, it can't penetrate, and it's not even true damage.
Chapter 154 reveals his full equipment: Bloodthirster, Ice Fist, a gauntlet in each hand, Shapeshifter, Force of Nature, and Thornmail—all materialized and worn on his body, along with Heartsteel. The explanation given for the absence of Titanic Hydra and Ruined King's Blade is that he uses his fists, and weapons wouldn't be appropriate.
It's alright, a level above most other One Piece fanfics!