One Piece: My Sword Skills Train Themselves

Yes, get Ba Tang out as soon as possible.

It is not good to be strong just to speed up your cultivation. Deduct one star

The protagonist's character is so wretched, like a copy of Momonosuke, always touching other people's breasts, looking down upon him. Touching Maginot before was justifiable, but to be honest, does the protagonist's automatic training system really lack this acceleration time? Then came the most disgusting part. When training with Kuina, the little girl looked sanctimonious and said it was for Kuina's sake. It shocked me. If you, the author, take a closer look at what you are writing, it would not be surprising if this book was banned.

The front is okay, but the further you go, the less interesting it becomes. Moreover, the author doesn't know much about One Piece at all, so various settings have been changed. Did Overlord's color awaken because of anger? What nonsense! It was because someone disobeyed his orders. The protagonist woke up because Brother Ming's men were disobedient. Although there was anger, should it be the anger of disobedience? According to the protagonist's hatred of pirates, it is impossible to change just because of Garp's words, but he changed it, which is very embarrassing. The protagonist should have the same personality as Akainu, and the protagonist's ability has a lot to do with killing pirates, but he just gave up. Later, various saints, the person who caught Doflamingo wanted to be imprisoned? It's a bit too naive, and it doesn't feel good at all. If you have a system to automatically cultivate, you should be a lawless master, and you have also awakened the overlord color. Do you know what the overlord color means? He doesn't care about any orders and does whatever he wants. He is the kind of person who says the same thing. Who can control such a person? Being a pirate is the right choice.

Maybe the poison points are different depending on the individual. To be honest, I definitely think it looks pretty good at the moment, but the fruit is a bit too rough to show how powerful it is at the moment. It may have just awakened. I wonder if the name of this move can be written well. What about the big spray? The woman has won two of them so far. As for the stronger one, I think it's good that she can't be the unconscious one. Both of them have emotional foundations, so it can be said that it's a natural fit.

Damn, this was written after reading the One Piece fanfic. Anyone who has read One Piece will not write it like this. Zantetsu Swordsman needs to understand the breath of all things, not the sword energy, not to mention that the Sixth Style of the Navy can be taught so casually? People who haven't even joined the navy yet learn six moves, and then try to touch Bogart. It's so awesome! , Bogart at least has the combat power of a vice admiral. How dare you write that a man who can't even perform a flying slash is overwhelming Bogart? Then he's Garp's adjutant. How could he be so weak?

Let me talk about my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. The setting of automatic cultivation is not bad. After all, it is considered a golden finger, not a shabby one. Let's talk about the fruit that the protagonist eats. Since you don't choose the fruit according to the original work, then you should choose a better fruit, such as a space type fruit, or a seraph type fruit. But you choose a water fruit [Shocked] According to the author's way of writing, it should be They should be of the semi-invincible type, let's not talk about the navy ones. After all, in the navy lineup, the pirates, Whitebeard, Kaido, Golden Lion and the like are not useless, but I feel that the bonus is not high. The fruit I chose is biased towards the auxiliary type. Isn't this a disguised form of suppression? Anyway, I felt uncomfortable watching it and had no desire to continue watching it. As for other people, looking at their ratings, I felt that they were similar to me.

As I write it, it becomes a stallion story, and there is no mission requirement to keep looking for beauties in the drama, and I am speechless when I keep looking for new people. I have already said that about stallion stories.

Sure enough, there is a reason why your book has a low score! I really can't stand it anymore. Ever since you learned that excitement can speed up your cultivation, you have started to act like a hooligan unscrupulously! Good guy! You can do this to children, and you are awesome! Don't tell me that the protagonist is also a child, his soul is an adult! ! Good guy, just play this book like a gangster. This book is no longer available for reading.

Compositions for primary school students: Holy Mother, licking the dog, awkward [laughing awkwardly]