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This book has a much more complete setting than the average routine novel, and the plot is also quite good. It can be seen that the author really pays attention to the readers' thoughts (even likes every comment, and replies to most of them). The writing is smooth, the plot is fast-paced, and the plot is dense. In short, it should get at least 9.1 Points.

It's well written and very thoughtful. After the character change, the protagonist is very cute, smart and kind. I also like Yan Wencheng, Chu Feng, Wu Xiu and Ruonan, they are very kind. The plot is also very good, and the author's thoughts are also mixed into it. It can be seen that the setting is very rigorous and well thought out, but it actually doesn't need to be said that much. The story is very rich in ideas, and the plot contains a lot of the author's thoughts and insights. It took a lot of effort and a lot of brain cells. Therefore, the novel is very good, but it doesn't really need to explain so much. And I think the author is more suitable for writing popular science fiction, which requires so much explanation and so much thought.

The writing is quite good, but the few 10,000-word chapters that introduce the worldview in the early stage make people feel dizzy, just like when they watched Fate/Zero and the duo turned around in a few minutes. Wouldn't it be better to unfold it slowly in the plot? Worth reading, a rare masterpiece in Tomato Transformation

The writing is quite good, better than those mindless cool articles and most of the same type of writing I have seen. The logic is quite strict and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I have only read half of it now. The overall impression is good, but it is a pity that the results are not good [face covering]

I really like the heroine, I must keep her female body! ! ! ! !

It's very, very, very good-looking. The author's writing is really good. The structure and plot of the entire novel exceeded my expectations. I originally thought it was a relatively ordinary transgender novel, but after reading it for a while, I found that it is one of the few high-quality novels I have encountered. I really admire the author's thinking and imagination. The quality of the work is very good, and the flow of the entire novel is also very smooth. The settings in it are perfect. I think the character creation has reached a very high level. It has a strong sense of immersion and is worth reading. From the foreshadowing in the first few chapters of the novel, we can see that the author's vision is very grand. There is no conflict with the setting. There are also many foreshadowings in it. Many plot directions are unpredictable. I also like the character of the protagonist very much. It is unique and novel, and the appearance is also very good-looking. The white-haired bare feet are very graphic. The author's writing style is very strong. I rarely see writing like this author's. Nowadays, many online novels become boring after reading them for a while. But this novel by the author kept me interested and kept reading. I even stayed up late for several days in a row to read it. It is really beautiful. I admire the author and hope that the author can write better and better [love] [love] [love]

It's amazing to see such a detailed book on Tomato. As a Western fantasy, the author has presented it well in the narrative, and the writing style is very comfortable to read. There are also some settings mixed in, and when I look at it, I feel like I felt when I watched Journey to the Dimension (?) Writing a book on Tomato is really a bit humiliating. Overall, the plot is complete, the setting is complete, and the pits dug are well filled. I can feel the author's intention, but many things are destined to fail to cover everything. The author's ideas are too powerful, and even a million words can't seem to support the content the author wants to depict. So some parts are more for the plot and setting, and the emotions and interactions of the characters are not as delicate as your second book [laughing] Overall, many chapters are particularly amazing, and it is a rare good book~

Excellent book. Full characters, magnificent and scientific world structure, twists and turns of growth, and intertwined destinies. "What kind of ending is worthy of this journey of wandering?" People live for themselves, and no one can stay away from changes. Deep friendship and common experiences break down the barriers between people, and our unchanging original aspirations and firm self will surely point our way forward. From destiny to beyond destiny, I find that the trajectory of my life has been arranged. Should you go with the flow, or break through reincarnation and reach a new ending? The truth is not only in the hands of a few people, but also in the hands of those who hope to break their destiny, who always strive for progress, and who never give up. Only by forging ahead can we have no regrets.

It's wonderful, there are no major problems, and it feels like it's not inferior to those books with a score of nine or so. The main reason for the small number of people is that there is a lot of paving in front, which affects the perception. Personally, I feel that this book is a slow-burning one. The author can focus on attractive elements when recommending books, such as: sexual transformation, lolita, white hair and bare feet. As far as I know, there are not a few perverted lolita fans like me in Tomato. [Laughing evilly] The main purpose is to attract readers to read the foreshadowing at the beginning, so that they will naturally continue reading.

It's very interesting, but I feel that the progress is a bit fast and it's too easy to get confused. I'm afraid that it will become more and more confusing later on, and the readers will not be able to figure it out, and the author himself will not be able to figure it out. I also want to ask, the combat system you wrote as the author should be based on Xingyue's combat system, and there are wishing elves in the Heroic Spirit Space and wishing elves that misinterpret other people's intentions. So will the protagonist participate in the Holy Grail War in the future?