After Being Cheated and Swindled, I Became a Magical Boy

The writing technique is very delicate, and the characters' personality changes are well described before and after. After suddenly entering the invitation of the Silk Thread Witch, the style has changed a bit, but it can be seen that the author wants to dig out a main line. Come on

The author is a light novel lover!! Absolutely!! The writing style of this novel is very similar to the Japanese light novels I read, and the protagonist is also very cute. It just doesn't have the dark depth of the classic Japanese magical girl novels (I think it's very good~). Overall, it's a great novel, very suitable for readers who like to read Japanese light novels~~

It looks good, but the pace and switching of perspectives are a bit fast. Then there are a bunch of settings thrown at the beginning, inexplicable flashbacks, and long and abrupt analysis... There are many minor flaws, but I like the writing style very much. I hope the author can also improve himself and slow down the pace.

This book describes the psychological feeling and environmental feeling, as well as the complex plot. How to say it? The psychological effects are really well written. The protagonist gradually changes from the confusion and disgust at the beginning, although there is a mastermind behind all this. Our goal is also very clear, which is to defeat the final king, but we are not sure what the final king is, or why the elves do this?

Very good, I can't see anything wrong with it anyway If you bring it in, those self-descriptions won't feel too inconsistent. If you don't bring it in, you'll understand, hehe! In Chapter 17, the protagonist acted too weak and gave in. She knew that others were using this to oppress her, but she could not become stronger. We still have to fight for territory, what's wrong? If you choose to give in, can you avoid their harm and threats to your partners? It's okay to write about weaknesses in some aspects, but when you use your partners to threaten you into submission or restrain you, you have to show that you are tough and ruthless. Otherwise, when they push forward, you will still retreat again and again?

The writing style of "Bianbai" is excellent, but it is partial to hydrology, and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. Magical girl setting, group portrait, first-person perspective, emotional line is reasonable, lolita control welfare, other settings are just average, next book.

The characterization and psychological description are really great, and the first-person perspective is also unique, allowing me to quickly enter the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist opens his heart to Su Wan under her care and concern, and the ambivalence about sexual transformation is well portrayed. The plot was also good and quite attractive to me (but the part about eating hot pot in the apartment always felt like I had missed watching it). A good treasure novel😳😳

Overall good The problem is that the main character, a 30-year-old man, has a mentality that breaks down at the drop of a hat. It's not as hard as a little girl

The main character is so cute!!!! The author has created the images of the protagonist and supporting characters very well! The delicate psychological description is the finishing touch, instantly shortening the distance between the readers and the characters. Also, the protagonist is so cute! Like it, like it, like it the most!

It's so rare to find such a magical girl fanfic on Tomato. The psychological description is really delicate. It's great.