The Outcast: I'm Done Being Human

Although the system gave us a weakened version of the Stone Mask, this Stone Mask is weakened far too much! In the original vampire comics, even an Inhuman would be turned into tomato sauce if hit by the monstrous strength of the Stone Mask. [Shocked]

What's going on? Why was it deleted? Anyway, let me say it again. Many people think the idea of the protagonist gaining freedom by joining the company is problematic, but isn't having official backing the greatest freedom? If you haven't developed yourself, is it wrong to cling to a powerful figure? Xiao Zizai treated people like human scorpions and nothing happened; no one arrested him.

Both are acceptable. Aside from the initial escape from the village using the Corpse Demon Mask, the system feels redundant and unnecessary. It would be better to simply provide the Hanma bloodline or the Kuuga belt, or the opportunities and skills from *Under One Person*. These abilities and techniques can be obtained through one's own abilities and methods.

👌Author, please add it as soon as possible👉"", then I'll come back to read it.

The author got several points wrong: The North China headquarters of NaDuTong is in Tianjin, and the Central China headquarters is in Wuhan, not, as stated in the text, that North China is in Jiangxi, and Central China is near the capital. East China includes Shandong, Jiangsu, Anhui, Zhejiang, Fujian, and Shanghai. South China includes Guangdong, Guangxi, and Hainan.

Well, the idea is good and the concept is creative, but the writing is lacking. Some intended meanings are simply not expressed, resulting in something else entirely, making it difficult to read, illogical, and illogical – which is why many people criticize it. However, overall it's quite good and worth recommending. Hopefully, it won't fall apart.

Even when the Old Celestial Master was seventeen, he might not have reached the Ten Elders level, and suddenly a new one appeared in the author's writing.

Keep it up! Keep it up! This perfectly matches my image of an "ordinary person" who doesn't practice Qi. I love this kind of superhuman physical strength!

I think the author could try writing something like the protagonist, the ultimate being, and Bao'er develop feelings or empathy, and then they end up together (●°u°●)"

It's really good, but you haven't updated it in a long time. 😠😠😠