Pokemon: Becoming Ash, Starting in Pallet Town

It's so well written. Although the configuration of Pokémon is a little different from the original Ash, what remains unchanged is the emotion between Ash and Pokémon. It's really amazing. Many of us can be the kind of trainers in the game, but trainers like Ash who have deep emotions with Pokémon, and the author who can write about this, is really amazing.

The author writes very well, especially the relationship between Xiaozhi and Pokémon. This relationship is protection, companionship, trust, and family. And Pokémon is getting stronger step by step. The writing is very good, please update it, please keep it updated.

I forgot to comment, please add a comment~~~ The author will update soon!!! The description is very visual. The author relies on his unbridled imagination to carve out every detail of the Pokémon world so vividly that it feels as if it is right before your eyes, making you feel as if you are actually in it. The character creation in the novel is also very attractive. The pure and deep bond between the protagonist and Pokémon, from the initial encounter and running-in to the tacit understanding when fighting side by side, each stage of growth is described in detail, making people feel for it. (It's mainly based on the trend of anime, but it's really great to have innovations.) They faced challenges and overcame difficulties together during the adventure, conveying the courage to never give up and the persistent pursuit of dreams. This spiritual power is extremely contagious.

Almost unchanged

The armored bird replaced the eagle that had been waiting for more than 20 years, and Hercules replaced the released Butterfly. The interaction with Pokémon was very touching, but there was too little new content.

It's really well written, but there's really no need to include the Spearow part.

Well written, not bad

It doesn't have the condescending attitude of a time traveler, but the writing is very suitable for Xiaozhi, which is to conquer the elves. It is different from before. In terms of caring for Pokémon, Xiaozhi's taste is just that I don't know whether this book is purely a travel and battle novel, or a travel and battle novel with a single heroine or a harem. I would like to give it a five-star support.

It's good, I just think it's really unnecessary for the armored bird to be so sexy 🤦

The part where I conquered the armored bird and Heracross was not very good. I repeated the engraving. Then the protagonist said that he had to go to the elf center for treatment, but ended up training overnight. Furthermore, the physique of the super newbie did not show up. The most intuitive manifestation is that he is not physically strong. The writing is okay, but there are a lot of minor issues.