Demon Slayer: Happy End

You are already great. Although there are a few flaws in your writing, you can just correct them. I hope you can produce better works.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, author, please come on! ! ! Two heroines, Ruri and Ninja! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's really super beautiful! So wonderful, so sweet! The characters are all well described without OOC, especially Sister Shinobu! ! ! (Crawling forward in a twisting manner) (Snarling) (Running forward) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Crawling forward in a twisting manner) (Snarling) (Sneaking forward) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Running crazily) In a word, it is worth entering.

Come on, author, it's a very nice book [sending my heart] [blowing kiss]

Beautiful, highly recommended, Xiao Liuli and Shinobu are very sweet, so cute

It's very good-looking, the characters are very restored, and the self-created plot is very interesting. The relationship with Shinobu is very smooth, and it makes up for all the regrets. It is very good, and it is not a brainless novel. The protagonist slowly grows up and has a sense of accomplishment. The background story of the protagonist is also interesting. I read it from Fujiwara Kiri's book. Come on, I think this one is more interesting than that one, but there is no emotional line between the immortal flowers. They are awkward and weird to be paired together, which gives people an inexplicable feeling. But except for this poisonous point, other parts are excellent enough and deserve full marks. Without this, it would be the icing on the cake.

The interaction between Xiao Liuli and Shinobu is really sweet! ! This is the sweetest relationship between two people I have ever read [Love], especially the extra story. Xiao Liuli really loves Ren, and Ren is extremely doting on Xiao Liuli! ! I kowtowed to my head, I really kowtowed to my head.

Although they are all alive, what should I do if Shinobu is snatched away from Giyu? Although if it were me, I would take Shinobu away, but I don't like the way she and I get along. It feels very twisted and a bit embarrassing. Then there is the follow-up episode. I didn't watch it. I just want to see everyone have their own destiny in the end and they are all still alive. So four stars. Keep up the good work, the author. The plot is still okay. I quite like the development of the plot. It's not too frustrating, but I think the recovery time is a bit long.

The writing is readable, the emotional line is so-so, and the plot is okay, but for someone like me who has been killing fish in RT-Mart for thirty-three years, it is calm and it didn't touch my point. Overall rating: OK, 50/50, can pass the leisure time

It's so difficult [I'm about to cry], but I finally found a Yuri who can tolerate my sister, and it's still finished [sending my heart]