Demon Slayer Fanfic: Su Die

It's a very good book. The emotions are very delicate and the descriptions are on point. It's a pity that the protagonist is a small piece of wood. I look forward to the enlightenment later, but why the hell are there so many knives? It's so fucking scary to me. It's so fucking scary to me! ! ! ! !

It's very delicious... I didn't watch anything related to demon slayer at all. The author lured me in with his two heroines, and kept me with his increasingly proficient writing style. It also made me want to read the original work for this fan. Oh, it's a very delicious meal, and Izumi and Shinobu are very cute. Let me continue to look forward to your updates.

Needless to say, it's good-looking. The characters are not obviously OOC, and the emotional lines are also handled very delicately. The author's Xiaoren is what I see in my eyes: rational, intelligent and decisive after losing my sister, gentle and strong, but sometimes revealed a little fragility. Occasionally, he has his own dark underbelly, which may not conform to everyone's ideas, but it clearly has the author's own understanding. The protagonist Quan also has his own shining points. If Shinobu is Izumi's light, an angel, then I think in the eyes of others, Izumi himself is also a little sun. The light of salvation, she is careful and considerate enough, puts herself in other people's shoes, has her own gentleness and principles of doing things, and can bring warmth to others just by standing there. The arrival of Quan itself is another gift to the world. The shortcoming is that the number of chapters is still too few. By the way: I don't want to kill my child, I'm afraid [I'm about to cry]

It looks good, I support this forbearance 1

Very, very nice article. Whether it is among the fanfics I have read or among the two-heroine novels, it is a rare masterpiece. At first glance, the author is someone who is very good at writing - the words flow naturally, and the lives of the girls in the Butterfly House seem to be unfolding before their eyes. No matter whether it is daily life or plot, it is not boring at all. Although I haven't finished reading it, I can't help but comment first. It's so beautiful.

It is a very good-looking book. The characters are not broken, and the plot is smooth and not abrupt. It is a very refreshing daily novel at the beginning. You can see that the protagonist is getting stronger and growing little by little. But let's talk about why the author is so sadistic later on?

I think the front part of this book is very well written (as for the subsequent story, the author has not written it yet, so I will not comment yet. The author will not take a break to update). I think there is no OOC in each character. As a person who does not belong to this world, the protagonist's appearance is not so abrupt. I don't like it very much. I like those changes to the plot that are too abrupt. I feel that some fanfics add too much cheats to the protagonists, which makes the combat system a bit collapsed. Subsequently, the characters in some fanfics are a bit flat (no matching is allowed) because I think these sorrows and losses are the process of character growth or the price? In fact, some of Shinobu's sadness can also be seen in the original work, but as a reader, I still hope that Shinobu can have a good ending? I feel that Shinobu's death in the final battle was too tragic (? I want Shinobu to return to his ordinary moments as a "human being", rather than a tragic story of a "pillar" or a "person with the purpose of revenge". I think the ordinary life is a gentle and profound complement to the passionate tone of the original work: between battles, swordsmen will also be injured, tired, and confused, as well as have personal preferences, boring playfulness, and quiet contemplation. I always believe that official stories provide solid bones and a beating heart, while the creation of fan fiction is like spreading capillaries, transporting the nutrients of emotion and understanding to every remote corner. Perhaps each author has a different understanding or style, but together they guard this created world. And in those parts of the official narrative that are line drawings, we often imagine what the story is like. Under the candlelight of fan fiction, the shadows left by these line drawings also have a vivid shape. I hope the author will continue to persevere! (I can't write a thousand words, please let me go)

It's a very relevant book. For me, the two female protagonists Butterfly Ninja's relationship is best described so far. The storyline of the female protagonist without being OOC is also very smooth without changing too much. It feels good.

Oops, I just remembered that I forgot to give the author a big rating. It's so beautiful and beautiful. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I'm here to fulfill my promise. I will definitely write a book review after they get together hahahahaha. It's a very nice and heart-warming story, with both sharpness and sweetness. There isn't much writing to embellish or lengthy descriptions, but the concise writing style better depicts the image of Demon Slayers. I really like this kind of neat writing. It's better to leave some room for imagination. It's much better than other grinding stories. I hope the teacher will continue to work hard [please update]