The Outcast: The Strongest Gu Master

It's very well written, I like it very much

It's great to watch. It's written so well without destroying the original plot, and it also adds characters created by myself. The non-travelling characters are amazing.

This book is really good. The addition of new characters and plots has not ruined the original story. The current book often makes the system feel tired, so I hope the author will not collapse the plot in the future. Come on [learn it]! ! !

It's a good book. Some of the plots and sentences are too stiff, but it's innocuous. The main character's background buffs are a bit too much [eating melon], but I don't hate it. I must read more, otherwise I'll have nothing to read.

Very good. Except for the Luotian Dajiao and Biyou Village and the plot. If possible, change Lao Liao's fate. Both Lao Liao and Chen Duo had the best ending of their lives. If there is a heroine, Chen Duo is a ready-made heroine. After all, she always thought she was a Gu. They are so perfect for each other. If possible, change Chen Duo's feelings towards Lao Liao. This is a pair of poor people that I find difficult to reconcile. If the author has an outline himself, he must not change anything for the sake of readers. Of course, if there is anything that offends most readers, I hope the author will change it appropriately. This book is currently a very good fanfic. So far, there are no poisonous points. I hope that if there is an emotional line, the author can describe it more vividly. Many novels discourage people from giving up as soon as they have a romantic line. I hope you can handle the emotional line well.

It's very well written, the author must keep writing it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The only pity is that it ends here. At first I was confused as to why I only wrote so much, but later I realized it was excusable. I gave four stars not because the book was broken. In fact, the outline written later is very good. The previous plot has many similarities with the original work. However, after using this book, I can roughly review the original work so that I won't understand it. The four stars are because the part about Japan is easy to write. After all, Naruto One Piece and other Japanese comics are very popular. I can write about Japanese aliens directly. It has been brought into a system, but, since we are talking about innovation, the plot is average and there are no ups and downs, and I have only watched over-the-top videos on Douyin. Those various escapes are familiar and unfamiliar to me, and they look very awkward. It is good to have an original plot. I hope that there will be new books that can write innovative plots with some ups and downs, some creation of moves, or a combination of multiple aspects. It is just that the various escapes are a bit weird at first glance. The second is that this is not completely creative, but also opportunistic.

It's very good, but the plot progress is a bit fast, and the article doesn't have many twists and turns. I hope the author will add a little more in the future, and finally ask who the heroine is? I hope the author can answer my curiosity.

This book is really well written, and it's one of the first few Under One Person fanfics I've ever read.

Highly recommend this book to the author. I haven't read the original work, but I feel very comfortable reading the author's fanfic. I'm also very interested in the setting, and I really like the character of the protagonist. So far, we only see the protagonist and Chen Duo returning to Qinghe Village. Looking forward to the subsequent plot unfolding.