One Piece: A Beta Tester Who Knows How to Stir Things Up

It's a pretty good piece of writing. Nothing too poisonous Rather than having the protagonist's memory blocked, it would be better to change it to someone who doesn't know the original work at all.

Sure! Mainly for a relaxing and leisure time! Ace and Luffy go to the navy! The highlight of the plot change! Slipper Dragon meets the red book! The protagonist who doesn't understand the plot of One Piece is the player's identity! The butterfly effect has begun to cycle

Before I knew it, I had reached chapter 100. To be honest, I didn't think much about it when I started the book. I also read all your book reviews. The protagonist was indeed a little nice to Luffy and Ace at the beginning, but then basically nothing happened to them, but I think some friends didn't like this kind of plot. But one thing to say, I don't regret writing the previous plots. After all, they are animes that I started watching in elementary school. Until now, I must have selfish feelings for them. I write fan fiction in the hope of fulfilling my different childhood dreams and giving them different endings. If you Yanzu and Yifei think this book is still readable, please give the author a thumbs up. Finally, it's not too much for the author to give his book 5 stars, right?

It's considered the best among the new pirate books [laughs] It's highly recommended and worth reading. But there is one thing bad about this book. The author is too slow to update. I hope the author can do better 10 times a day. Fast, fast updates, not enough updates, not enough updates

This book is also called: Garp's Final Fantasy

I gave you five stars out of respect for the book, but I was deceived by the title, so I deducted one star. First of all, I only read the second chapter and didn't read the introduction. I originally thought this book was a group portrait, about modern people exploring the world of pirates, but then I read the introduction. This is a systematic and exciting novel about Long Aotian's otherworldly world, which is not much different from traditional pirate fan fiction on the market.

Doesn't the protagonist know about One Piece?

The subject matter is novel, the writing is good, and it is a relaxed and casual semi-invincible article. Personally, I suggest that the protagonist add a personal panel, a full character illustration, etc. It would be good to gradually unlock functions according to military rank or map. I personally don't like to change the main line of the protagonist group, or I suggest having a GM to wrap up the timeline. This is also a very interesting point. The protagonist only wants Luffy to become a marine, and the GM only wants to wrap up the timeline. Well, actually, the reasons you stated in the article for persuading Luffy and Ace to become marines do not convince me. The main plot is to clear the sea of ​​justice? Then I didn't see the protagonist actively looking for it. According to the map, you should be opening the Shichibukai map now. So before that, the protagonist should be taught the situation in the training camp. It is good to use the training camp cultural instructor to add a chapter to introduce the time pattern and major historical events. Otherwise, those who have not watched One Piece will only be confused. As for the memory, it is indeed not as good as other reviews said. The protagonist is a game fan. I have only heard of the anime One Piece. The protagonist is a man named Luffy. I don't know anything else. This should be easy for you to change. In general, I personally recommend that the protagonist add a personal panel and change the initial setting to someone who has only heard of One Piece. The most he knows about the protagonist is a guy named Luffy with a straw hat. The world view and basic introduction must be there, otherwise it will be difficult for passers-by who have not watched One Piece to watch.

It's okay for the protagonist to join Cape Town, but it's a pity that it's more of a daily routine. Currently, I see the protagonist asking Nami to fight pirates. The protagonist's personality is very good and interesting. It's a pity that he didn't go to the pirate world to play around. Instead, he played with the protagonist group and Garp. It's a pity for me. Overall, it's pretty good. It's an excellent novel.

The writing is very nice, and even those who don't watch anime find it very smooth. The characters are very three-dimensional. Come on. It's great to watch, the plot is smooth and interesting, the battles are invincible and exciting, the characterization is full of richness, and the dialogues are interesting and fun. In one word, it's amazing.