The Terrifying School

It's super good. When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan haha ​​[Cool]

Generally speaking, it is a five-star review, but there are many things that can be improved. There are too many short stories and too many supporting characters. Although each story is good, the connection between them is too weak. It is too far-fetched to rely on one Qiao Yiyi to connect the whole story, because Qiao Yiyi's description is not full, and it is too difficult to connect the overall situation. The author told the first few short stories well. After a slight modification, it can be about the protagonist group encountering supernatural beings, when they are desperate and helpless. At that time, Qiu Yiyi united everyone to form the Ghost Hunters' Revenge Team. Each chapter of the story is still intervened from the perspective of those new characters, but Qiu Yiyi's Ghost Hunting Team is used to connect the whole story, instead of Qiu Yiyi alone. It is mainly described through the dialogue and life actions between the team members, and constantly strengthens the presence of the protagonist group to promote the development of the story. You can also write Qiu Yiyi in a few separate chapters, and you must enrich the character of the protagonist. Finally, I wish the author a great sale of his work!

It looks good so far. I think this way of writing should not cause the story to change from something exciting at the beginning to the middle. At present, it seems that there are multiple protagonists and they are connected. If it were just a short story, it would feel like the story is over as soon as you get into it. If it is written with a single protagonist and reaches the extended stage, it will inevitably be mixed with some funny, immortal, or even emotional scenes, which will definitely destroy the overall feeling of weirdness and horror. I always feel that horror stories should always be weird and scary. Therefore, the writing method is most in line with the requirements of horror novels. It just depends on whether the core of horror can still be online. I personally don't like ghosts and gods. I always think this thing is a bit tacky. It may be visualized by some shoddy film and television works. I think the horror elements should be upgraded and closer to life. For example, supernatural phenomena, occultism, mountain village cults, time and space turbulence, and the living dead research base during World War II are all more exciting than ghosts and souls.

I have low education and cannot understand I have low education and cannot understand A good author will only write the stories he wants to write, not the stories his fans want to read.

This is the real suspense, with interlocking links and a compact plot

It's so beautiful and all-encompassing.

Personally I think it's super nice [cool]

It's so strange, isn't anyone interested in such a good book? There are really very few people watching it. When he updated it, I was the first one to remind him of it. It's outrageous. It's really exciting.

So pretty! The plot is great

It's really exciting to read more than 100 chapters. I hope the following chapters aren't cheating and cultivating immortals.