Naruto: Kogure Jusan

There are a lot of examples, examples, etc., Which are a bit verbose, but the description of ninjutsu is still good. The protagonist is a civilian, there is no system or anything like that, he becomes stronger step by step, which is good. I look forward to it and hope it won't be unfinished.

The plot doesn't drag on! Smooth and powerful, with strange details and science, I give this book a score of 99.9. The remaining 0.1 Points cannot be given anymore. I'm afraid you'll be complacent. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] Thank you to the author for writing! I voted! The mission to save the world of book waste! It's up to you! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Some suggestions, the writing is OK, but there are too many explanations. The explanations can be reduced. Too many explanations will affect the perception. If the author feels that a little explanation is needed to explain more clearly, I think he can put those explanations together and leave a chapter to write those cumbersome explanations. At least it will look better this way. After all, after I watched it, many people said it was too cumbersome, too ink-blotted, and explained too many problems. This is just a small suggestion from me (I am just a stranger, without any malicious intent. I respect everyone's opinions and hobbies, and respect all groups. This is just a dispensable opinion. Don't carry it, don't scold me. If you scold me, I won't refute you. You are all right)

Haha, pretty good! In the early stage, it was only ordinary people who were strong enough to get in touch with important supporting characters! The combat is pretty good too! How old are the children at the beginning of other novels if they meet Tsunade, Jiraiya and the others! Asking them to learn ninjutsu or something like that... Is really embarrassing! So licking! This protagonist is pretty good! The strength itself is very good! Ninjutsu is also developed by oneself! The protagonists of other novels learn from this and that! Really not creative! As for the characters, this novel is much more original than other novels! The other characters in the novel are either Kakashi Obito or the others... Many of the supporting characters don't even have names! Forcibly inserting the protagonist of the same story, without any sense of substitution, even if there is no sense of substitution, it also magically changes the character of many people! This is very good! I like the character of the protagonist. He won't lick others just for ninjutsu. Others will teach him ninjutsu and give back! The character is a bit sultry but the psychology is much better than other novels! Good

Not bad. I hope it will be OK later. . . Come on The front just started well. . By Chapter 3.40, This awesomeness is almost reaching the sky. . Decrease wisdom

It's really well written, at least it's the best one about Naruto that I've seen so far, in my opinion. Author, keep up the good work and update as soon as possible. There are so few updates every day. It's not enough.

It's very interesting. I wonder if there will be a female protagonist. If it's Kushina Uzumaki, that would be even better. Come on, the author, please give me more.

It should have been five stars, but it was too wordy at the beginning, so I deducted one star. So far, it's pretty good. Also, I want Kushina to be the heroine [Sending my heart]

Although the protagonist's strength improves very quickly. But the rhythm suits me very well. It's not like Shuangwen, which is too slow, one at a time.

It's a good book, the plot doesn't drag on, and although it's not sloppy, it's still pretty good so far.