Naruto: My Uncle Is Hiruzen Sarutobi

1Brother, give me another chapter. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you. Give me another chapter. I'm dying. Please! I felt like there were ants crawling on me. I felt like my whole body was shaking and I could hardly breathe. Please, bro. Just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother, it's really just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore, brother!

How can I say that it ranks among the top five fanfics in my mind? I added some of my own characters and the idea of ​​the story seems to be true. It doesn't feel uncoordinated. It's just that the update speed is slow [thoughts]

Not bad! It feels like Konoha Dave.

It's good. There is very little content about the refueling system in the book. I hope there will be more in the future, with elements from other worlds, or I can develop my own ninjutsu to become a ninja version.

It looks very good, but there are some places that I would like to mention. There are some small typos and some missing words. I hope this can be improved. I don't seek perfection, just try to reduce it as much as possible. Come on! 👍

Finished it in one night. Well, the author happened to be free, so he corrected the mistake overnight, and his attitude was very good. The content is not bad. In some places, I feel the fear of being dominated by composition writing.

It's okay. Can see. The Konoha Water God is too watery. The successor will either open a parallel world, or travel through time, and the alien giant tree invades. Unifying the Naruto world will definitely not work, just like reality.

Send a daughter. . .

Konoha Water God! 😠

To be honest, I like the books you wrote. They are simple, realistic and a little funny.