The Immortal Path Through the Sea of Sand

Many readers have left comments saying that the author's settings for magical artifacts, elixirs, and talismans are unclear. This is the author's fault for not explaining them clearly in the book, so I can only explain the settings here in the book review. I. Ritual Implements Magical artifacts are divided into nine tiers, with each tier represented by a restriction.

The protagonist is cautious and prudent, killing when necessary and running away when necessary, leaving no future troubles. He is not a saint, and in the face of life, family, companions, clansmen, and women are all insignificant.

Indeed, the phrase "being lenient with oneself and strict with others," along with the sarcastic remark of kicking someone when they're down, perfectly encapsulates the image of an ordinary, mortal, or insignificant protagonist. Lin Yanzhen didn't die, so I'm giving it one star; the rest of the book is good, but the women are disgusting!

Keep it up, author! It feels like it's getting to the point.

This is the true history of human cultivation! There aren't that many lucky breaks; only through diligent cultivation plus a bit of good fortune can one achieve the Great Dao! It's well-written! But it's a pity it only goes up to the Golden Core stage; it would have been better if it had gone up to the Immortal Realm!

This is a really good cultivation novel, truly exceptional! Keep updating, keep it up!

Keep up the good work, author! I feel the plot could be a bit more convoluted, and the protagonist's strength could be increased further. There aren't too many plot holes so far. After finishing the novel and unlocking the new map, I hope Lin Yue will have a stronger improvement. The book's rating is so low! It's quite well-written; it's a shame it got such a low score.

The writing is good, and it avoids some clichéd plots like deliberately giving away easy loot or the "pretending to be weak to actually harm others" trope. If the author is under pressure, they should write less; just don't stop writing altogether.

The author has good writing skills and a clear mind; they have the makings of a cultivation novel writer. 👍👍 The beginning was very well written, so why the rushed ending? Did the author get appendicitis? My condolences. [OK] I only realized halfway through that the author has warped values, no wonder the rating is so low.

Author, I'd like to ask, what kind of spiritual roots does the protagonist have?