Arknights: The Terrible System

It's really great! (≧∇≦*)

I wrote a little fanfiction? The church was littered with the corpses of Hai Si and Deep Sea Cultists. Xiao Feng, leaning on the Sky-Splitting Spear, slumped onto a humanoid Hai Si corpse. "That was close. Even with the Blood Ice under my complete control, I almost got myself killed. I really don't know how those guys dared to use a walnut to fight a bleeding dog." Xiao Feng muttered weakly.

It's okay, but not entirely. It uses the Ark setting, but while the birthplace is clearly Iberia, many characters have names from the Great Yan Dynasty, forcing me to feel like I was reading a classic martial arts novel. It should get much better later on, since I haven't read many chapters yet (this is just my opinion, don't criticize me, if you do, you're right).

It's alright, it's alright. Hope the storyline moves faster, start as soon as possible. Blacksteel International is a great plot device, develop it well, and don't stop updating.

Well, it chose a relatively uncommon writing style for fanfiction. The key to its success lies in handling the plot between the original characters and the original setting. I hope the author can consider the original plot while being innovative. Overall, however, the story's flow is sound. The emotional moments were also well-timed. The only drawback is the female lead's character; I still don't understand who the female lead is, so I'm giving it four stars to remind the author.

There are already very few Arknights fanfics by Tomato, and even fewer that suit my taste, but this one satisfies all of them. Keep up the good work, author!

Want to see the main storyline I want to see w, I want w

You can beat Hai Si, but not thugs, right?

A rare gem among Tomato's works; aside from the slow and short updates, it has no major flaws.

Keep it up, author!